Nice story, your grammar needs work but I think the plot and the story itself is you need is more paragraphs with the quotes and the story would be perfect. Not bad! :)

RaWr , DANG I LOVE YOUR STORY! *Love hearts float around head*

Please write more in Part 2. lots of eyes ARE watching *looks around* "EK!"

OMG Great story

*goes to read next one*

OMG im guna read the next one as soon as i can its so cool

Wow, what a great story, thankyou so much for writing it! _

Wow, what a great story, thankyou so much for writing it! _

I loved that one!

And how beautiful you ended every fing!

I hope will make anoter story that thakes place abaut 5-10 yers after this one, some fing like Eggman strikes back!

*applauds and tosses mounds of roses* BEAUTIFUL! That was an awesome story! Melody was uber-cool, and the final battle? Talk about intense! Yay for Metaru! Down with Eggman! And all sorts of other cheers like that! _ This was a joy to read, thank you so much for writing it! Keep it up!

Kya, how could I forget about this fic? *smacks self with Piko Piko* I am so immensely sorry! You even mentioned me in this chappie! T_T I feel so special.. oh, the review! You're really making Egghead out to be evil.. I like it! Dramatic action! Poor Amy, she CAN'T be dead! And Sonikku. *sniff* I nearly cried. I tend to picture these scenes in my head and I got all choked up! And Shadow's backers? I adore your story, you've got a good plot going with great characters and storytelling! Keep writing!

This story is a sure favorite of mine. It's so neat! Thanks for writing it. You did a terrific job, and I'm so happy to see Metal Sonic with a mind of his own. That is amazing, and this tale is wonderful!

Wow. That's just classic. _ I can see it perfectly. Your writing is filled with alot of emotion, not just action. I like that. You make it real. Knuckles and Rouge. _ Veery good.

WHOOHOO! GO AMY! Kick his a- *grins* _ Okay. That said, I'm off to finish the rest of this, well done and rather exciting fic. *waves giant Amy Rose sign* Go pink demon!

Thanks for all the reviews once again. White wolf, no worries, it happends, I don't mind. As for all the gap holes, sorry about them. Nothing happened to Amy, I was so wrapped up enjoying the Amy I forgot about her. She is fine. I may add that sooner or later. o.o

I didn't intend to post the same review twice. I have no idea why that happened.

Wow. I'm speechless. I've read a lot of Sonic fanfics, but this one is probably the best one I've ever read. I wonder what happened to Amy.