Reviews for A Night of Firsts
Lexie chapter 12 . 4/1
update soon.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/14/2019
Story feels like it has deviated away from Antonio and Sylvie. Is that the intention?
EmisonHeaven chapter 9 . 4/6/2019
I love this update! Still struggle a bit to put faces to names with not having seen most of the show but I love. You must teach me how to write actions in words I struggle with that.
Guest chapter 9 . 3/30/2019
Awesome stuff! Keep up good work
Sarrabr4 chapter 4 . 3/24/2019
If I read between the lines she’s pregnant, hope Antonio gets his head out of his ass
Sarrabr4 chapter 1 . 3/24/2019
Cute first chapter, Can’t believe I missed it.
EmisonHeaven chapter 7 . 3/9/2019
loved this! still haven't really started/gotten into the show so Im still learning who people are. Jay and Erin are so adorkable! they got married! hehe. I love how Erin much like Brooke Davis calls people like hank out on their BS Behaviour etc. Sean & Kim is that #Bursek couple? I like them. its cute cause kim doesn't strike me aas a girly girl yet gets all gaga for sean so cute! I love all the investigation stuff in this chapter too. Had to do a quick read through. Heading out today. xoxo Exellent job lovely.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/26/2019
Great chapter. Can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.
EmisonHeaven chapter 6 . 6/30/2018
Jay & Erin are engaged! Can you here me screaming! awwww so cute! Kelly and Laura interesting! loving this!
EmisonHeaven chapter 5 . 6/30/2018
Antonio and kids is adorably funny to read! Kids can be great sometimes! I had experiences like this myself sometimes working in childcare. :) do I sense chemistry between severide and laura or is that just me? Did I read it right or did Antonio propose to Slyvie on the toilet while she's in the middle of peeing on a pregangcy stick or had previously discovered she's pregnant? That's an interesting scne but so domestic and normal for couples to invade each others privacy in the bathroom hahaha.
EmisonHeaven chapter 4 . 6/30/2018
Is Slyvie PREGNANT! I GOTS TO KNOW NOW! Oh this is getting good. Edge of my seat good! I continue my binge of this show don't I? This extended drabble is great!
EmisonHeaven chapter 3 . 6/30/2018
This was so sad, adorable an funny all in one! Attmepting to fix the sink was just so good! I hate it too when things go wrong like that. And you try so hard to fix it. looking up google is something I do often for things like that. haha. The whole gang coming together to help out with the grandson was sweet. You know I love Erin because of Sophia Bush so anything with her and kids has me squealing with happiness! She's so motherly that one. Antonio and Sylvie getting...busy haha they don't waste time do they? Erin not being surprised that she's walked in on it was great.
EmisonHeaven chapter 2 . 6/30/2018
Haha. we've all eaten 'that extra piece of chocolate cake'. We've all been there! Zumba classes that hilarious! cops doing Zumba is a funny image! Antonio denying that he and Sylvie are dating was kinda cute! 'like no we aren't!' haha So transparent. ;) Boxing as a date? now that's interesting Sylvie seems funny I like her! She seems sarcastic and I love sarcastic people :) they make life fun. Reminds of my sister Ally actually. hehe. 'You look like hell!' I'm loving this so much. 'You should se the other guy'. he's so proud of himself. A paramedic with a hangover patching up wounds hmm could mean trouble. Clearly Sylvie and antonio have some serious chemistry! :) Those fiery kisses wow! I'm dying here! Like wow! Teach me your wirting ways oh talented one! #begging #prettyplease Amazing!
EmisonHeaven chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
I have no faces to put to these names as I haven't gotten very far with the show yet but I love these three already. Gabi wanting her friends to find happiness together is so sweet even though she's not so sure its a good idea. 'Son of a.." I laughed at Sylvie burning her tongue (I can relate to that) So many times that's happened to me! its the worst lol. Sylvie lying about her feelings to protect her friendship with Gabi is sweet too. Nothing says 'I'm into you' more than denial! haha. Thus was great a very real and raw conversation between two friends. I loved it!
MelaK chapter 5 . 4/23/2018
I can't really see Severide and Laura together, but the rest of the story was great.
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