Im happy I found your story and I understand that things are tought I am just happy your staying safe.

Well done my friend.

Go and fuck off with this SJW crap, not all men are misogynistic or bad

Please continue this story, I really like it.

Very interesting. It is good to see Geo gain control.

Why is this story marked as complete with a n ending like this?

You know Ruby is angry when she uses profanity.

Ehh this story is not for me
While its not bad and some may like it
For me theres Little to no meaning behind this story
While There are some points of interest for me they would need to be improved on and get deeper to outeweigh The negatives i get here
Not really at The level of bashing but close to resemble something like that in my opinion
And rape especially is not in my enyojment area on The contrary i rather hate it
And while i understand its There to make me hate some characters or sth like that
You failed to accomplish this with taiyang as an example
So yeah
Thanks for The story But this is not a piece for me

Too fast
Too trusting
The whole experience of ruby feels so... cheap?
Artifical? Wrong words in wrong moments?
Not sure how to describe it
Just it feels wrong while reading it
Like you know it this is not true it should be different
Just not real on General
Im really bad at describing anything
The idea for The story is fine nad overall not Many problems
The relations and reactions need improvement so far
And that bit with Her trusting too early she was deeply hurt through years how could she dismiss it now after some days
She should panic, fight, something, anything cuz shes in danger right now make her trash around when he kissed her
Make her cry
And when she calms Down Then say "I cannot trust you yet but im willing to give you A chance Please dont dissapoint me " or something along those lines
Like your story title says she is shattered broken
In pieces oc should get these pieces together with himself as The glue and should something happen to him Then ruby will Break either for good or to more pieces
Really it would so much more if you were to give it A deeper meaning
Has thats what im Looking for something deeper
Cuz u have us only The surface things

Please continue this amazing fanfic it’s the best rwby fanfic I’ve read to date

HELL YEAH MAN!

Another SJW Story where Men are bad

Dude this is so good

what? Ruby is pregnant!? WHAT!? plot twist, kinda expected it when they had fun, but this truly came to me as a surprise. Geo snap out of it or I'll blow your ass cheeks off!

Wow