I want part three right now but I will wait. I knew Sandy wasn't dead! Pips has every reason to be upset and to try to get her to fall in love with him again. Also, I think Mother Ash is right, Crysta will remember with time. I am glad that Lilly found someone that will be able to grow old with her, but that means that Zack is left alone again. Maybe he is the one that will make Rose happy? I'm just guessing.

I am sad that Damian is gone but I understand that you are the author, and that him living didn't fit. I believe you when you say that Rose will find happiness again. I am glad that Fern is pregnant but worried for her. I can't wait to find out where Crysta and Rose disappeared to.

If Rose is at the falls, then I hope she is ready for Julian. Also, I still want Rose and Crysta to be friends but I didn't expect it to be as easy as Rose sarcastically said it would be.

My gut says Sandy isn't dead but I could be wrong. I hope Pips, Wil, Crysta, Rose, Father Ash, and Damian make it out of this alive.

Pips has been branded a lair and yet he was telling the truth. He doesn't even remember having one and if he did, then he still doesn't know where he is because he hasn't seen her since he was little and she never said where she was going. I want to see Julian get it from his "son".

No, you aren't. I have felt it since she started having feelings for Wil. I am more concerned about the impending fight then Lilly's love life. I hope Damian will not betray Rose and will live through this war. I think it would be nice if both, Rose and Pips, got happy endings.

If Pip's did forget his protection, then I don't want Crysta to lose what she might have. Also, I love how Rose was caring enough to blow her cover and let Sandy know that someone was watching over him. Granted, Sandy isn't her main concern.

I didn't even think that it was Crysta, who had sneaked up on Pips. He has every reason to be angry. He could have killed Crysta and almost did. I'm glad her and Fern got home safely. Also, Batty has a very good point. In a way of speaking, he expressed the same fear as Father Ash. The only difference is that he went into detail.

Yay, a cliffhanger. I want more now but I will wait. I'm guessing someone knocked Pips out. Only thing is, I'm not sure who. Roman won't be there for a couple of days and this dosen't seam to be his, or Julien's, style. It could have been Rose but I'm not sure.

And yet the movie made him look old. I enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for the war, no more then Roman can. I can see both Fern's point and Father Ash's. He needs to acknowledge how good she is with a bow and she needs to understand that his family is everything.

Well, Rose isn't going to be happy. Pips is not only being sent out to fight, he is one of the scouts. Mother Ash is right, this isn't keeping him safe. Also, Crysta will have to get her head on straight or she won't be able to handle the fight that is coming.

I think Pips does remember Rose but he has lumped her in with the dead. Probably due to too much trama. I love the backstory you have given Pips and hope that he can see his sister again. I also want to see Julian pay.

I am loving this story. You caught the tenderness of the moment perfectly. Honestly I would have laughed if it hadn't have been Pips that showed up when she needed him, but this is better. I am also glad that it seams like I'm right about Julies being after Pips. Sorry if I mispelled his name.

I didn't realize there were two chapters for me to read. So, I guess I'm posting twice in the same night. My gut says that the ruler of the forest, that Roman is in, is the person that Pips thinks is after him. Even if I'm wrong he has every reason to think it and be worried about losing her and not being able to do something. I am glad someone gave him the will to talk to Crysta. I don't think there would have been a way for things to go right if she had talked to him first. Unless he came to he on his own terms.

In my mind I was yelling no just like Sandy. I had to smile as I realized that. Also, I have to say that I wanted them to stay together so bad that it brought tears to my eyes when they broke up. I think that it is because they tried to talk too soon. It can be just as bad as talking without a clear head. They also need to want to make things work. They weren't at that point and I think Wil should have stuck with his gut.