This all was AWESOME!

Aw this was amazing!

Thank you for the feels trip!

This was a great read, and you ended it quite nicely. The canon characters were not too OOC, and Crest was a pretty interesting character to play off of Jesse. You did a great job!

Omg this story was so stupid :((((((((((((((

Umg why would you use OCs and why is Jesse male ur doing it all wrong you seriously need to stop writing

Ur story sucks get off the internet :(

Intense Things Intensify. That is a perfect description on this chapter.

OOOOOOHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Aiden: Why have we wasted 20 hours of our life listening to Sammi scream?
Cosmo: You should know 'why' by now.
Stampy: Yeah.
Rueben: Nnnh. so loud!

I enjoy the story and I really hope you keep it continued

Geez. I will have nightmares of creepy ender-Jesse now..
*shudders intensely*
In a good way, of course!
This story is amazing!

This stroy is golden or maybe emeraled

What?!
What's wrong with him?!
I'm freaking out!
(This is my calmest review. Like, ever.)

Oh geez I love Crest.

XDDD

THIS IS AWESOME!
Well written, good plot line, IT'S AMAZING!
Verisita: And it's got good grammar!
Skyrix: And spelling too!

Heya Rhi, neat to see ya on the world of FanFiction (yeah, I suck at greetings). But erm... Yeah. I await the next chapter! (even though I already read it on DA. In that case I await the chapter AFTER that)