| Reviews for Trade Mistakes |
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bro chapter 12 . 10/12/2018 brooooo this shit so good, i love angst and you gave me the right portion for the day, i hope you have more stories... imma check your profile right now |
KassidyRayne chapter 12 . 10/26/2017 I usually hate first person/reader insert stories bc I'm anal about that kinda shit but omg this is such a great story! You really made everything work! It was a great combination of the actual storyline and your own twist, great job! 10/10 would read again |
Avatar.NIX chapter 12 . 9/12/2017 Damn, that was one emotional roller coaster... But it was so good at the same time. The way you fit in all of the routes and a number of endings and how they related to each other was really cool. Very nicely done! |
junaraks chapter 1 . 7/16/2017 I Love your story . Although I don't like reset theory (because I can't stand the thought Saeyoung love MC in other timelines even when MC loves someone else. that's greatly pained him. and I love him really much, I don't want to see him hurt) Hope you continue writing new stories about mystic messenger, I will look forward to your next piece! _ PS. So sorry for my terrible grammar but I hope you understand what I mean |
fernandfeather chapter 12 . 6/19/2017 Cool take on repeats. |
Aquarica chapter 12 . 1/16/2017 Very nice story! Love it |
autumn.n.woods chapter 12 . 1/11/2017 I don't think I could have express how much I appreciate this story! Thank you so much for writing it! It was perfect! All the feels... Ps. I'm a sucker for angst, too. |
Sky65 chapter 12 . 12/9/2016 Holy mother of god, I want to cry at the endbecause, well it's ended! Beautiful story! This here is exactly what I pictured for the reset theory, tbh. Seven is honestly my favorite, and MC and his love is so strong at the end. The way you let the story flow was perfect, the angst was believable and not overbearing, Seven makes my heart melt, and MC's actions make so much sense canon-wise...I loved reading this story. Normally I hate second person, but this was so well done. Thank you for taking the time to write this, good work! |
Kavernista chapter 12 . 11/23/2016 That was very good! |
TheBlueAmethyst chapter 11 . 11/22/2016 My heart is shattered. I'm getting flashbacks of all the routes and the Secret Endings... it's killing me. I really love this story though, it feels so... alive. As for what's wrong with MC, I think it's trauma of seeing V die. I mean if I was the one who saw that, if I had the power to rewind time, I might consider going back so nobody gets hurt anymore. But, what of Seven in that case? And the others? The pain will get stronger... Like, Saeran is now ok, but Jumin lost his best friend. Rika's faults were covered up but Zen and Yoosung are left in the dark even more. Jaehee's tired of all the secrets and I'd feel even more guilty. Still, I don't want them to get hurt once they know. I mean, that's a lot to think about. Look at me rambling... Plus, there was a build up of guilt amongst other things. MC in this case wanted everyone to be happy... but in the end, it may as well disturb her mental state even more. She just wants this to end... and finally be free. Of course, sacrifices are part of freedom, and the price was V. God, my mind is restless. Anyways, I love your writing style! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Love, Ame |
Pep Pizza chapter 11 . 11/20/2016 OMIGOSH V DIED?! D: D: D: |
27Faith chapter 11 . 11/19/2016 Hmm... if I am the MC of the story , I would totally break down in fear , trauma and the lost of loved ones ... A-And judging how the story flows now... I'm just thinking that the ending is just gonna... break hearts . I hope my intuition on this would be wrong. But nonetheless , I'm still looking forward to it ! |
HikaHime27 chapter 11 . 11/19/2016 hm.. trauma? i dont really good in guessing sorryanywayyyy cant wait for the next chapterr |
destielin221tardis chapter 10 . 11/15/2016 So I stayed up all night reading your fic but unfortunately I had temporarily forgotten my login. As I have remembered I came back because you mentioned if you should add another chapter and I had an idea. Wouldn't it be terrible if you fast forward to a happy ending with 707 but time resets but you don't receive a message from unknown and you have to go back to your life before and 7 doesn't answer your calls and it was like all those years never happened and you lose your memories. I thought hey, why have a nice ending. Let's break some hearts |
27Faith chapter 10 . 11/14/2016 It's really making my heart melt ! Seven is really a sweet boy despite being cold in the mids of the game. I really love it! Please make an additional chapter ~ :) |