And another one down! Even with the short piece, I really do like the ending that was achieved. It's rare when others take the mantle of the Overlord of the Dragons and how Azrael does it is completely him.

Can't wait to start the new few chapters and continue this amazing tale!

Holy crap... I loved this chapter... the barbs and the way the General's spoke to each other with your own little twist on the words. This chapter had me giggling and I have been waiting for the wit of Azrael to make an appearance.

I have to point out how amazing this little piece is because you really do show how indifferent Azrael is when it comes to the war.

Hi, me again. As always great work. You inspire me to improve my writing, thanks for the thrilling journey. Cant wait to start on the next installment. - RR

Excellent,Absolutely excellent!

really enjoyed reading this story! looking forward to the next chapter

really enjoy azrael & delphines dynamic

I really like Az. It's nice that there isn't a bleeding heart for the hero, or someone who is obsessed with doing the right thing, his clinical icey approach is refreshing. I believe I'd enjoy talking to him, simply because of his brutal honestly and sarcasm, providing he didn't try to kill me that is.

Really love the stories and Azrael its really a good character, and the relationship with Elisif its really intersting and nice, and now lovers even, its really intersting that basically its a very new experience for the both of them, and considering Elisif position has maybe future High Queen of Skyrim, and Azrael has Master of the Thieves Guild, Listener of the Dark Brotherhood, and the Dragonborn I cant help but get anxious for their future. I cant help but see them has The Right Hand and Left Hand of Fate togheter.

The only problem I had was the fact that there was not alot of interactions from the leaders of the Thieves Guild with Azrael regarding his position has Listener of the DB, it kinda makes it like they mostly ignored that part. But overall nice storu cant wait for more ]

Loving it! Keep up the amazing work!

I like the interaction between azrael and esbern, you can't do that in the game... something I'm still a little salty about

what a start. I'm going to try to keep a record of the number of kills in this book, I'll probably be swamped but I'm going to try. so far there's been 4. I'm not sure if you got my message because my pm sometimes screws up. but if your looking for a beta I'm free, no pressure