Looking good here

So far I like your characterizations and the relationship between the two main characters. I look forward to more

Very curious as to what happened to Anderson though I cringed a bit when it seems she had become addicted to pills. Though to be fair, the nature of the incident, the surgery and the medication are all still a mystery and all may not be as it seems.

Wow, I am so excited to see this . You write very well and have created an intriguing beginning

Police Car?