Wow - great story.
Hopefully the sequel will be out soon - I really love your story.
BTW: If you would accept unsigned reviews you'd certainly get much more - your stories deserve them
Claudia

Interesting ending here Dave, but I liked it. Hope to see the sequel sometime in the future but would love to see you continue the Immortals Series. Please!

Good way to end it. Sad that Jenny died, but she really did have to for things to go right.

Going to visit Cassandra...alright. She's not psycho Cassandra who keeps trying to kill Methos, is she? 'Cause I don't like that one at all.

Gonna guess that Wesley is the one in the car following them?

Hey! No leaving it there! You have to continue!

Hey! I thought I was helping Beta too?

Like the twist...can't see how it's going to do a "Heart's Blood" thing, at least not yet.

And question; why the HELL didn't Buffy stake him after she realized, FINALLY, that she cared more for Willow than "Angel"? Just a thought.

Glad that Faith's going to be a Slayer too.

A worthy effort, and sufficiently different to warrant further episodes. I liked the characterizations and nature of the cross, which distinguishes this fic. I would tighten the story and plot development a little, but that is an issue for personal taste.

So, Willow and Jenny are Immortal, Oz's dead and Joyce's a watcher? Cool! Weird, but cool.