i like this story. you should finish it soon. have fun!

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great story cant wait to read the end good luck

what do you mean by that being the end? arent they going to talk about allen b? you've got to finish, the story is incomplete.

what happened to Nastashia and Argo?

I like the story a lot, but the only thing is im confused about the status of Domon and Rain. One minute youre saying his future wife the next youre saying the wife he's been married to for 9 months. Anyway i'm going to finish reading and see what i think of the entire story.

HI! WRITE MORE! I LUV THIS FIC! WHY AM I TYPING IN CAPITOLS? OH. *TURNS OFF CAPS LOCK* There. Better. Now, write more!

Hm... interesting. But there are some spelling errors that bug the heck out of me: it's Sai Saici or Sai Sici, your pick. Gulskii. Cecil. And that's all I can think of.

I'm waiting to see what happens!

Well, even if this is a weird fic, I still like it! However: what started as a G/ML fic turned out to be a D/R and evryone fic; at first, Marie Louise's father dies, making her leave France, ne? Later, not only it comes back from the dead to witness George's match, but dies again while at it! And, how the heck did George and Domon, who were INSIDE the explosion, survive and Dr. Kasshu and the King of France didn't? (Besides, Domon wasn't even in intensive care after it, for heaven's sake!) And, when Faith was young, she had black hair...which turned brown when she grew up. Not to mention, Russia was HOT...henna, ne? And, some of your foreign phrases had me confused for a moment. For example: "misur"'s correct spelling is "monsieur" and "BONSAI!" is a kind of rare and exotic oriental bush which looks like a small replica of some large trees. I really think you meant "BANSAI!", though.

Don't get me wrong, I'm just correcting you so you don't keep repeating the same mistakes. Your story has an interesting plot, though. Just one question: what was that black, bird-like thing that caused the explosion?

By the way, if I start charging my anime CDs to Rain's credit card number, can they sue me? O_o

UPDATE! _

Hey great chappie Cant wait for the

Sa meetin i want to Knoe

what else will happen i like

yer story Continue!

~*Lina567~*

P.s Why do i get the feeling that i am the only one reviewing? w/e Continue but im probaly wrong like i am alwayz! hehe :P

But then again there can be fluff in it too!hehe Kool a PARTY ! I wanna come ! Jk kool yeah update soon!

O O_o so things arent doing so well huh?

Its been past 16 year wow dats alot!

Kool so a sa meetin huh?

Well so much for G/Ml fluff oh well !

This is a very interesting story continue at

least George and Marie are alright! And the

rest of da Shuffle Alliaince! Update

~*Lina567~*

you are too damn good at cliffhangers! UPDATE!

excellent story!

how 'bout some of them "Suddenly" come back from the dead (strange, but I did it)

Allenby? Pfft. I was wondering where she was. NO RAIN! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! YOU'RE MARRIED TO DOMON! STAY AWAY FROM GEORGE! ... I'm anxious to find out what happens.