Congratulations on finishing this story of yours! :)

"... was quick to deescalate the situation. He reprimanded the wolf, fired her on the spot, and had security escort her out..."

that escalated quickly

DAMN this chapter is probably some of the best I've seen in any fic. PERIOD.

Cross-posted from AO3, as this deserves more reviews!

Firstly, congratulations on finishing - you have every right to be extremely proud of what you've achieved - a large novel-length work of considerable scope, complexity and depth.

Your love for this world and it's characters truly shines through, with the OCs you've introduced enriching and building on the original film's main plot.

Edward's character, in particular, is simply beautiful - a complex and flawed character whose arc demonstrates his considerable underlying strength in the face of adversity from both his upbringing and the terrifying situation he now finds himself in.

I greatly enjoyed this especially as the plot, whilst remaining dramatic, never sunk into hopelessness. Thank you for all the time and effort you've obviously poured into this - I look forward to reading anything else you produce.

That was beautiful

Aaaw, nice to see it come to an end.

To tell you the truth, the first chapters were a bit slow, and I had decided to drop reading the story until your pm came. I carried on, and then the pace picked up again. It was a nice canon divergent story with some tense and heartfelt moments.

Good job, and thank you.

So Ed is safe but out, and the case is in safe paws. I think I know where this goes on from here.

Yikes, a set of tense and thrilling chapters, ending in an utter cliffhanger. Amazing job, and I'm on the edge of my seat here.

Def canon divergence... But if Judy knows now, then it shouldn't be long until Weaselton, the subway and the rest

Yikes, things have taken a sudden turn for the worst here. Tense and thrilling, I have no idea where this might go next.

Bloody well done.

Uh oh, Charlie better look out.

Ans a lot of nice interactions throughout the chapter between different characters. Sharla and Ed continue to be a high point.

So, horn isb't completely irredeemable... Just an ahole.

And Dawn is onto them.

Aaah, they're cute together.

Yikes, so things pick up a gear. Clearing up with the family, but now they've got a whole lot more hanging over them...

This is getting into Canon divergence territory, and I'm getting excited.