| Reviews for Stay Away |
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Guest chapter 3 . 8/3/2017 your writing is shitty. but the story content isn't bad. It just needs a good beta. or another author to do it justice. maybe you can ask a writer that you admire to do it for you. or at least help you out. |
relentlessdreamer16 chapter 4 . 8/3/2017 It is a good story line. I hope the block goes away soon |
AceBaby'12 chapter 4 . 8/3/2017 aww first kiss |
relentlessdreamer16 chapter 1 . 8/2/2017 How do you play both boys and girls basketball? Their games and seasons often run at the same time. |
guest chapter 3 . 6/15/2017 I wish this was Emma g!p too. Please update your other story soon. |
ForeverRegalBeliever chapter 3 . 6/16/2017 I missed this story, I sense some deliciously awkward sexual tension coming up |
itsalwaysthequietones1 chapter 3 . 6/15/2017 Great chapter |
Lodi chapter 2 . 3/21/2017 love it tys update soon |
Lodi chapter 1 . 3/18/2017 please finish writing this si awesome. |
JhosyLephor chapter 1 . 3/19/2017 Ok, so...the concept is very good but the narrative needs be revised. It's have a lot of typos and confusing sentences. |
onmyway2u chapter 2 . 3/19/2017 I love this story. More please! It's not well written but it is entertaining. |
guest chapter 1 . 1/16/2017 Please continue this story and would you consider making it Emma g!p? |
LEIDEE D chapter 1 . 12/11/2016 I like the concept and the cockiness Emma has. But I suggest getting a beta reader to help with grammar. Good job so far! |
kittyybuuug chapter 1 . 11/18/2016 PLEASE please continue |
AceBaby'12 chapter 1 . 11/8/2016 so far its interesting! I like it |