Reviews for Stay Away
Guest chapter 3 . 8/3/2017
your writing is shitty. but the story content isn't bad. It just needs a good beta. or another author to do it justice. maybe you can ask a writer that you admire to do it for you. or at least help you out.
relentlessdreamer16 chapter 4 . 8/3/2017
It is a good story line. I hope the block goes away soon
AceBaby'12 chapter 4 . 8/3/2017
aww first kiss
relentlessdreamer16 chapter 1 . 8/2/2017
How do you play both boys and girls basketball? Their games and seasons often run at the same time.
guest chapter 3 . 6/15/2017
I wish this was Emma g!p too. Please update your other story soon.
ForeverRegalBeliever chapter 3 . 6/16/2017
I missed this story, I sense some deliciously awkward sexual tension coming up
itsalwaysthequietones1 chapter 3 . 6/15/2017
Great chapter
Lodi chapter 2 . 3/21/2017
love it tys update soon
Lodi chapter 1 . 3/18/2017
please finish writing this si awesome.
JhosyLephor chapter 1 . 3/19/2017
Ok, so...the concept is very good but the narrative needs be revised.
It's have a lot of typos and confusing sentences.
onmyway2u chapter 2 . 3/19/2017
I love this story. More please! It's not well written but it is entertaining.
guest chapter 1 . 1/16/2017
Please continue this story and would you consider making it Emma g!p?
LEIDEE D chapter 1 . 12/11/2016
I like the concept and the cockiness Emma has. But I suggest getting a beta reader to help with grammar. Good job so far!
kittyybuuug chapter 1 . 11/18/2016
PLEASE please continue
AceBaby'12 chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
so far its interesting! I like it
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