I really like this fanfiction. Its really detailed in the sense of an alternate reality in which Gabriel Agreste/Hawk Moth loses the Butterfly Miraculous and Marinette Dupain-Cheng, who we all know as Ladybug in the primary reality of Miraculous Ladybug, finds the Butterfly Miraculous and uses it to become Papillon. And I really like how this Papillon has real butterfly wings sprouting out of her back because of her kindhearted nature and her pure, positive soul. (I just hope that the wings sprouting out of her back didn't damage her suit.) However, the author of this fanfiction, Pottermania2006, has gotten a few things wrong about the Miraculouses. First of all, the Butterfly Miraculous' transformation phrase is "Nooroo, dark wings rise", and the detransformation phrase is "Nooroo, dark wings fall". Secondly, the Butterfly Miraculous' main superpowers are Akumatization, Body Control, Empathy, Power Bestowal, Power Removal, and Telepathy. Thirdly, the Butterfly Miraculous doesn't have any more superpowers, other than Enhanced Strength, Enhanced Speed, Enhanced Agility, Enhanced Reflexes, Enhanced Flexibility, and Near-Invulnerability. Fourthly, the Bee kwami's name is Pollen, not Hunni. (Then again, the author didn't know.) And lastly, the Bee Miraculous' weapon is a spinning top that contains a hidden stinger for the Miraculous' main superpower, Venom. But, all in all, this truly was a work of art, if I do say so myself. I just wish it would feature more. Maybe I'll feature something similar in a future chapter of my own fanfiction.

I just want to say thank you for finishing the story. I'm sorry that you lost interest in it, but I appreciate that you wrapped it up rather than just leaving it incomplete. It was an interesting idea and if you ever feel like writing a more in-depth version, I'll be interested to read it. In the meantime, thank you for sharing and please keep writing. :)

If Marinette is now the holder of the butterfly miraculous, what exactly are they fighting?

I just wrote a ton of questions for your last chapter, and now you've answered like half of them so.

Honeycomb's the villain! Honeycomb's the villain! Honeycomb's the villain! Yes yes yes! (Come on people!) Honeycomb's the villain! Honeycomb's the villain! Honeycomb's the villain! Yes yes yes! Honeycomb's the villain *continues chanting*

When she meets Chat, he says there's an akuma attack going on, but wouldn't that mean that there would have to be an evil Butterfly Miraculous user to create the akumas? And on that note (kind of), why were Adrien and Ladybug made superheroes? Like, in canon then they're superheroes because Hawkmoth, but if it's just petty criminals, wouldn't it be kind of unnecessary for there to be superheroes? Why not just leave that to the police? (If you don't really have any background, then maybe there's a huge crime ring they're fighting?)

Also, I'd think that Ladybug and Chat would be at least a /little/ bit suspicious of Papillion. They don't know her at all; why would they trust her?

And, is Marinette/Papillion going to join them more often, or will she stay more out of sight, like Hawkmoth does in the show, and let her Champions (or whatever you're calling them) fight for her? I've read a lot that the Butterfly stays on the sidelines and creates Champions to fight for her, and so therefore, Marinette wouldn't really need to come out a lot, would she?

I'm not trying to be a huge critic, and I'm not saying that you're a bad writer. I like this a lot! I'm trying to get you to dig a little deeper into the story, get a better feel for the characters.

I like that Marinette used her powers to help someone get over a heartbreak!

This is interesting! (And already finished! Yay, no waiting for updates!)

CC: Didn't notice any grammatical mistakes, but it seems to me that it'd be hard to tell if a butterfly's eyes were flickering in any one direction or trying to tell someone something. Maybe you just have it fly over to the west, then stop and turn to Mari, like "What are you waiting for?"

Okay, nitpicking here, you probably want a different name for Mari's butterflies, 'akuma' is the Japanese translation of 'demon'

That's okay, it's good being short. It's not long-winded or boring. :)

Amazing.

Or should I say...

MIRACULOUS

Wait, what about the beeva?

how is there an akuma if nooroo was already being used? nvm, XD. don't answer :"D write how you like!

I love it already!

Kill him. Kill him now.

Please continue this. I have read only two, maybe one and a half, other stories where Marinette gets Nooroo for her Miraculous, the idea has SO MUCH potential.

Please continue! I love the story!