I absolutely love this story! It’s one of my all-time favorites! You wrote the characters so well! Please update soon!

Hi. i love your McRoll stories. i miss them together on the show so much. please keep writing this story and/or write new stories about them. You write rhe best fan fiction for Steve and Cath that I have read

Hi I' know it's been a long time , but you showd continue .Or write another story

Please continue, I love the story

follow the story please

love mcrollins

please follow the story

Just read this for the third time, it really is one of my favourite Mcroll stories!

sorry, just finished reading a chapter where it says cath is pregnant. :)

is cath pregnant? We never heard about the results from the test after their honeymoon :)

Really enjoying your story! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thank you for another great update. Love how you managed to tie up the chess piece case. I too felt the episode was lacking a proper ending, given the evidence of the phone call to police.
Looking forward to your next update.

Loved it. Much better than what happened on the show. Don't know how they forgot about hearing the shot during the 911 call, and how that could've been used against Alicia.

Really liked that little tiny bit of drama with Alicia lying to Cath and then lying to Steve. In the show, the whole thing did look one sided, like she immediately had some sort off hero worship going on after Steve saved her from drowning.

Great job, can't wait so read more. I'd love to see more Steve/Cath fluff, hurt comfort, and sexiness ;) too :)

oh dios mio, que capitulo tan intrigante..no me esperaba que alicia fuera tan malvada..menos mal que catherine confia plenamente en su marido steve, nunca le fue infiel desde que estan juntos, desde el principio

al final, catherine y steve ya saben lo que estan esperando? a mi me gustaria que tuvieran mellizos..un niño que se llamaria john daniel y la niña se llamaria emily elisabeth

sigue publicando mas capitulo y no tardes tanto

por cierto estoy super contenta..con la noticia de que catherine vuelve a hawaii, espero que esta sea la definitiva

I'm so glad you're back to writing this fic! Nice tie in with the chess piece killer story

I'm so happy that Catherine trusts Steve, as she should, but sometimes people have difficulty, especially after they've had some difficulties in their relationship. It's good that Steve sent Alicia packing - she seems to only want to cause trouble in his relationship and Catherine is too important to Steve to let Alicia come between them. :-)