LOL YASSS! Though I am confused if the little ninja has feelings for a marimo?... and possibly and hot male in the future?... HE'S A GUY WITH A WOMANS MIND! WHAT DO YOU EXPECT!... Please continue on with the story though! XD XD XD

COOL

THIS IS REALLY COOL!

oooh, I like.

omg! your story is sooo good! please continue with it.

Awesome, I like the main character in this fanfic. And the reactions made to the situation by the oc interesting to read to. Having her/him as a ninja character is so cool. _
Anyways it was nice to read.

I cant wait for 'Ai' to join the crew

I had my doubts but I really enjoyed this first part. I'm looking foreword to seeing what will come next.

omg i'm so glad you updated. :D Aureus ductor is getting updated soon as well, look forward to it. Luffy is hilarious af like always. Gdi, of course he'd react like a dork to the idea of ninja. Coby is just hilarious. I hope to see some of Alvida as I've always liked her character. I mean, come on, a plus-sized pirate woman with super strength in the old days commanding a ship? Awesome. And Zoro is even more awesome.

Can't wait for Crocodile, my favorite villain of all time...gdi I love him, he's so clever and inventive. It must be the hook.

This chapter; I like it. Another! But seriously, the way the oc casually scratching the 4th wall is so fucking funny. You even got the normal time travel/bodysnatching identity crisis mostly right too. Keep up the good work and update as soon as you can!

Ah Roronoa Zoro, Omake - l am so speechless atm

Love It.

Oh my god the chapter was so serious and the omake made me burst out laughing
That was wonderful! Can't wait for more!

Omg I can't wait to see where this will go! It's such a good first chapter! Keep up the good work!

I love it! It's very difficult to find good fanfiction in the one piece fandom, especially when you're looking for gen fics with oc's lol

But this is very promising! The characters so far are original, the premise seems great. Oc's are far difficult to write but this looks as though you've laid out a good base to continue on. I am already liking the main character, which is rare for me as i am very particular when it comes to original characters! I would love for you to continue this!