Great story :) I'm really impressed by the way you portrayed Cas and Dean's relationship. It's the most accurate thing I've ever seen x)

This is one of the best fanfiction I've read in a while. I love it.

Thank you so much for sharing this story. I've love it.

Maybe John shouldn't have tell them about this ad at least not yet. Cause he has just trap himself too.

OK. I'm starting to like this.

I'm glad that Dean at least recognize that all that Castiel had ever done, were only to help them. Despite that some weren't the best of ideas.

Great Story

That was awesome! I see that I had read some of your stuff and then stopped . I have learned to save stuff now. I am happy I found your stuff again. Merry Christmas and stuff...

I knew John was going to put that sweater on! That's what I would do to get Cass to let his guard down all the way. John's an ASS. But why put the boy's on the lead to who might have taken Cass? Hum.. must read more. Thanks

I lost it when I read"I didn't want to threaten your masculinity"

wow. I got sucked in. Thank you.

hi! i am one of your reader and i have to say that your story is one of the best i have ever read. I want to have the honor to translate your story(to Vietnamese) but i doubt that i'm gonne receive your response so... yeah,u'll may fine your story on the internet but in difference langugue, i'm sorry but i must have your story. There aren't much SPN fan in Vietnam but i still want to do it, for fun and it help my literature skill and i really like you writing style, so beautiful. I will have a link to this page on my introducing page, and if you want you can go check out my page on wattpad at : 606466044-father-know-best-chap-1
If you want me to stop (although i really hope u won't) then just contact me on my page. :)

No what is happening!

overall the story was good, but I had some problems with the ending. I don't think they would have forgiven john or that they should have. I certainly don't think the four of them hunting together counts as a happy ending. John is still an abusive ass, he doesn't deserve forgiveness. Maybe he doesn't deserve to suffer in hell but it would have been better had the boys drove off and left him to live his life by himself. He would have heard second hand from other hunters that his sons were still alive and well but he did not deserve to be a part of their lives. still the rest of the story i liked.

This story is amazing! I think you nailed the characters and I just couldnt put it down. I read straight through all 38 chapters in one sitting it was so good.