Reviews for Hamura's Gift
supboyyyyy93 chapter 1 . 2/11/2019
I think this would've been a much better story in my opinion if it took place at the fourth shinobi war arc where there was an actual threat that made it necessary for the tenseigan to be used.
InfinityMask chapter 3 . 12/13/2018
I curious... making konoha more powerful didn't seem good idea. Despite the peace now human at the nature is jealous and little paranoid. Would the other nation see this as konoha want more and more power?
InfinityMask chapter 1 . 12/13/2018
I honestly unsure why I rarely see story Hinata having Tenseigan. It certainly would be interesting. Especially if she awakens that right on time for finall battle with Madara and later on with Kaguya. More ironic too. Haha
Hunter XZ chapter 1 . 3/4/2018
Nice, but Sasuke doesn't have a bandaged arm. Unlike Naruto, he chose not to get a prosthetic and just live with only one arm.
grimreaper40045 chapter 1 . 12/23/2016
I love this idea
Flameraven chapter 8 . 11/19/2016
Like this version a lot. Now i just wonder if Hinata with her "unlocked" eyes will have any change in the kids? Like, I don't know, giving them their REAL eyes from the get go and not having to wait for Hima to go all grandma for hers?

And you need to show up what Kurama can do with Hinata giving HIM a boost, now that you've talked about it, you know that right?
Kartikey chapter 8 . 11/19/2016
It was great. The fight was awesome. I just wanna point out that sasuke only has 1 hand
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 8 . 11/19/2016
Brilliant as always!

Susanoo'o Fusion!
and it keeps the wings!
...wonder if it can be refined even more to make the wings useable as weapons? four armed Jyuken?
Geek Girl Naruru chapter 7 . 11/17/2016
nice story i like it, can hinata have kaguya power?
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 7 . 11/17/2016
Brilliant as always
hmm...a giant sword eh?
i wonder if Sasuke or Naruto could wield it?
Or, Hinata makes Multiple smaller ones, and Kurama controls them with his tails?
...Kurama wearing Susanoo while cloaked in Hinata's shroud...
hey, if it works with Susanoo...you never know..
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 6 . 11/15/2016
Brilliant!
so, she can make a giant orb of death?
cool...
Flameraven chapter 5 . 11/13/2016
Herm... I wonder, is this "TK Juuken" what Toneri used to cut off people's chakra or really something new to Hinata? It could be either really, just her eyes duplicating something she has seen before that ties in well with her fighting style. Either way its broken as hell and I love it!
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 5 . 11/13/2016
Brilliant as usual
hmm...i think i read somewhere hat its possible to re-create the TSB's if they are destroyed? i mean, its all chakra natures combined, so if someone knows all of them, they should be able to remake them?
maybe its like, if one is destroyed, you have to learn to bring it back? li
because, well, if you go into SPSM, you have them automatically created, if you go out of SPSM with them out, they dissapear, but if you go back in, they come back, so i'm not sure why destroying them should matter...
Flameraven chapter 4 . 11/11/2016
Oh she should get the Rabbit thing, she IS using Hamura's chakra to unlock her eyes after all. Really she should have the most complete set seen in a long time. Her own skills on top of Hamura's. How long she is letting everything "settle" in and all.

Unless one of those things needed her to push herself to the limit as its adjusting, she is doing it under, probably, the most controlled environment these eyes.

And she is, now, an Uzumaki. She NEEDS over kill level of power!
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 4 . 11/11/2016
Great as usual
hmm..could elemental clones absorb more of themselves to stay longer?
like, the Air clone reformed from air, but, could the fire clone eat/absorb flammable materials to produce flames which it can use to heal/stay longer? ...for some reason i'm imagining a fire clone taking a bite out of a log, with the bitemark being all burnt...
if a lightning clones holds onto a power line, can it do the same?
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