| Reviews for A Warrior's Ascension |
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Guest chapter 2 . 12/31/2019 She has a magic mirror? Who is she, the Evil Queen? |
ahmad minuent chapter 13 . 11/24/2019 its aswome |
LyricalOne77 chapter 52 . 11/22/2019 Great story, hoping for the next update soon |
adis chapter 49 . 6/17/2019 I see this entire group as unneeded and idiotic so I am just going utterly ignore it until it's either gone or it's impossible to do so. |
Guest chapter 52 . 4/28/2019 Have you dropped this story? I find myself enjoying it. |
Wolf123dead chapter 52 . 4/17/2019 Is this being continued |
zdavis20 chapter 52 . 4/1/2019 updateeeee |
Elpatron1 chapter 1 . 4/1/2019 this fanfiction is absolute crap |
HaywireEagle chapter 19 . 3/10/2019 The Ethereal Refate or however it is spelled could have been done without. Sounds like a cheap copy of Stygian Iron. |
Axrael chapter 3 . 3/5/2019 This fucking broke me right now. I love percabeth and this was like a dagger through my heart. Fuck |
Wulfkin17 chapter 52 . 2/24/2019 Just started this story yesterday, finished it today! Well written, it is hard to make a Percy Jackson fic where it involves originality and smut and also isnt just less than 30 chapters with more than 50k words. Color me impressed, you are followed! |
Death Fury chapter 52 . 2/21/2019 Nice |
sidaqlotay07 chapter 52 . 2/20/2019 Good chapter, thank you for the update :) |
Hi Im Manu chapter 15 . 1/27/2019 YES,THIS IS A FLAME AND I DON'T CARE IF YOU THINK IM AN IDIOT. Be en hoping for a very emotional chapter in 15 "Broken blade". What I got instead was bullshit. I hated it,man. And it makes me fucking sad and angry. How can you do Bullshit like this? I hate when authors use a Plot just for the use of some event which will occur. Shouldn't a plot be something you have thought about for hours about hours and written and re-written it again and again until you love the plot,and not something you just 'Need to do '. Because that was what it looked like. Ares hated Percy why? Because he made his Daughter happy,and because he Defeated Ares when he was being controlled by an evil being. Yes,yes.. Blame it on Ares having his Pride hurt and him being stupid to not see Percy is making Clarisse happy? Yeah,that's just dumb. The way you killed of Clarisse,too,didn't make me feel anything,because ... 1 They relationship wasn't explored enough 2The death was stupid 3And many more I'm too tired to fucking count. And after Clarisse is taking her dying breath,Ares REALIZES everything. This is my fault,mY dAughTeR iS ActUaLLy mOrE imPoRTanT tHaN mY PrIdE OoPs I DiDn't ReAliZe uNtiL shE aCtuaLly dIeS DaMMiT. Yeah,that's fucking next Generation shit I have never seen in my life before. Then again,many things are being repeated so that isn't half as bad. Look at (nearly) every Pertemis story. Most ICONIC plot,right?No. Still,doesn't make happy if something classic iis repeated in a story. Also,may I just add that I got triggered that you destroyed Riptide?Don't care if it's for the sake of new weapons or something,it triggers me and the way it broke was completely stupid too. I'm not an expert but I'm pretty sure that it doesn't matter that much how much strength you have,than the way you Break a Sword. I was once told that when you are the one swinging the sword,it is more likely to be destroyed than the one your sword is aiming for,if the other sword is standstill. But that wasn't from a expert,so it could also be utter bullshit. Still,triggered me that you destroyed Riptide. will continue reading because the story isn't actually bad and I think there is a good overall plot and it's good written,but that small Clarisse-Percy-Ares Plot just made me angry. |
Silver566 chapter 5 . 1/11/2019 This is moving fairly quick. Im wondering if the gods know about Himeros visiting |