Oooo! Please update! I really want to find out what they want Hiro for. I always felt like someone should have been interested in him for how smart he was. Looking forward to seeing how Hiro and Tadashi get out of this!

Yayyyyyy! You're back! With a cliffhanger... AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH, are you going to hurt Hiro in front of Tadashi? My smol baby (I love your story btw)

Training for the Army!? That's amazing! and conquer friend I hope you do well! Thank you forgiving us a short chapter though at least it was good! As much as I would have liked keepgping, I like where you ended the chapter. Very fitting. Thanks for the awesome update and I hope you do awesome in your life

I like your story plot. A few notes though... you keep using was when you're talking about objects. When referencing multiple objects it would actually be were. Also I'm having a hard time trekking if this is past tense or not, you keep switching.
Overall I like the story and can't wait for more.

GAH!

Aaw honey lemon, such a sweety. I love this story! it's really interesting that you had both brothers be kidnapped instead of just one, and I'm super excited to see how that plays out! (plus, with Tadashi there protective older brother will be that much more present! woohooo!)

Nice job on chapters 2 and 3; I'm excited for this story :)

SO SHORT! UGH CLIFFHANGERS! I'm looking forward to the next one!

This is really interesting and I hope that you update really soon.

This is interesting. Continue when you can.

I think this is a great start and I have a feeling this is going to be an awesome story! Good job so far :)

It reminds me a lot of this other story that was never finished. But I'm interested to see where this leads! It's a good start. Can't wait for more.