Hey I really like your story.

I'm a little irked that probably half the word count for this story was author's notes. A decent story. But I feel slighted.

one of the things i really hated about canon was obito being forgiven like seriously? he killed your PARENTS created a death squad to hunt you down he started the BLOODLINE PURGES killing THOUSANDS seriously there comes a point where you just think is kishimoto sucking the Uchia's cocks? because they get EVERYTHING

I dont know who was reading this story but this story is awesome, the drama was amazing, you're an good writer dont let anyone tell you different

Just read this story. I like the way it was created and written, and how you implemented your own feelings into your writing. Every good writer should do that. Anyway, good story, and I hope to see even better ones.

what's the point of unsealing the tails?...
just to show off and tell them he's a jinchuuruki?...
He's a previous anbu
I cant find the logic of him showing off like that

Decent story for going your of your comfort zone could've been done better for the relationship building as ending but I'm content with it nice job

Decent story for going your of your comfort zone could've been done better for the relationship building as ending but I'm content with it nice job

I struggled through that atrocious grammar for this?!

Going to be honest, with or without any Naruto x Ino, this chapter was absolute shit.

Do you know how to tag a story?Character death means you tag it with tragedy!What love did they had in this story?Nothing only bitching and some stupid walls! Story is great and all that but not my type of story.

well I guess I hate myself to find this story too late so I'm not recorded in the list above haha
I love your story, even the pace is somewhat fast, I love the "roller coaster" you put up, which combining your story with the original plot of Naruto. anyway, I wish you luck for your next story and please make more NaruIno story XD

regards from Indonesia
Shadouryu

You sir got balls to tell your personal problems like that on here. Got nothing but respect and I'm loving this story. Hopefully your other stories are just as good

aww, I feel special ;) thank you for your hard work

I usually don't like short stories, but you made me have interest in them. So thank you for writing this story. It was a enjoyable read.