The story was ok. Too much dumb stuff going on

Ok so our protagonist is now of a higher than Ozpin, one of thee most if not thee most powerful hunters on Remnant... and possibly the reincarnated form of the Old Wizard from the story/battle between him and Salem... So OP.

Ridiculous. The prices are so low it isnt even funny. 2$ for each personnel indeed. And the 5th member is just dumb. Special snowflake...

my name is guan- GUAN DEAGGG MUTHERFUCKER

Kill yourself

Fuck off no way off saving penny? how about warning ozpin or ironwood about what could happen? he could make bullshit about seeing that penny was a robot because of the car accident. BUT NO WTF!?

God... I really hate fanfics in which the MC is overpowered but is unable to change a single thing because of plot as the Author is too fucking dumb to write something original and just wants to ride on the Canonical story.

Love him? Sorry but no. Michael has had almost no interaction with Goodwitch. It’s not possible for her to live him or he her. He just woke up from drunken memories where he’s discovered he’s married a stranger. This after he married two others while almost strangers. There is no love here. Just immature lust and a lot of lies. This author is a fucking moron. No hope for this colossal idiot.

Skip this chapter

So like an idiot he lets Roman get away? And yes I mean let. Michael could stop this in its tracks. For what reason is he letting people die. For what reason hasn’t he derailed canon? Oh that’s right because the author is an incompetent idiot.

Anyone coming to the reviews to see if the story is worth reading. It is but you wind up skimming/skipping more than half of the chapter So realize that the word count is probably 1/3-1/2 the size advertised. There is so much filler that has nothing to do with the plot or RWBY at all.

Another pathetic chapter where the real story content is smaller than the stupid shit.

Waste of space. This author is a idiot stay on task moron.

So much wasted with pointless shit on thallassa. Why is any of it important to the plot? I can’t see how it is at all and more than half the chapter was pointless drivel and stupid filler. More than half was useless. More than half was a waste of everyone’s time. I hope for the stories sake that this was the only time you inflated the story with a completely different mini plot inside the story. Mini plot? Maybe I should rename it since it’s bigger than the real plot in this chapter.

I'm done with this story, honestly, it completely lost the plot and it's full of bad writing. Most of the important stuff happens offscreen and is never mentioned until you suddenly pull a new skill out of your ass just because it's needed. OP stories haven't the potential to be great, this is not one of those stories.