Can you petty please continue this book because it one of the best rwby fanfiction on this site so far!

Well, that escalated quickly

I think you are balancing this story with canon well, but I'm interested to see what new path you might take this on.

Another good chapter!

I like that Adam is not hiding his horns, it's interesting to see how it changes things.

I thought you did good with the combat scene, it flowed well.

Ah, puns. They can make things both better and worse at the same time.

This story is actually making me like Adam Taurus, good job!

Well, you got me hooked! I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes!

Interesting but pretty much just canon so far.

Thanks for writing.

I'm really glad you're updating your story again, I look foward to the next chapter.

Nice work. I think you have good handle on Adam's voice and viewpoint. Nice choice on why Velvet's reluctant to fight back.

You ever thought about having your Adam meeting regular Adam?

I ship YangXAdam or would that be too obvious. I was thinking you could toy with Pyrrha and Adam. I like their dynamic.

maybe Adam should get a part time job with Tucson?

Awesome update :)

Damn, this is pretty good. Definitely keeping tabs.

Quite nice and funny chapter, glad to see for now they have to deal just with assignements and a few bullies while challenging their inner demons. Not so sure about Velvet being in Shade(maybe it was better write it happened while she was still at a preparation school, but after all Remnant's school system wasn't so defined in canon). Best of luck with next chapters and battles, i'm also curious to see Sun. I wouldn't dislike if he ends with Ruby, here.