This is one of my favorite fanfics (not "Young Justice" fanfics, fanfics in general) of all time. I love how you break the writing into short, yet poignant fragments. Your simple, stylistic writing style is beautiful. This fic makes me want to read your original work.

omg i love this story so much I almost cried

So incredibly sad but so sweet. Great job!

...Wow. Just... wow. It's absolutely beautiful.