Amazing chapter! I really liked this cliffhanger. Can't wait for the next chapter. If you need any ideas in the future, I might have some.

You did awesome with this chapter!

Um Harry was born in 1980 so how the flying flip is he alive in 1978? Also Sirius would never be in Grimuld place in 1978 he was banished.

a couple things. one you say Albus is Lily's sister. two I don't know why you'd have Teddy Call Sirius Sir. Prongs. Prongs is James. Padfoot is Sirius.

You should do a few paragraphs in Harry's, Ginny's, Ron's or Hermione's point of view. I think it would be funny to see their thoughts. Also, how old are they all supposed to be? 'Cause the younger they are, the more awkward it would be.

Cool chapter! But I'm not exactly sure what's going on...

Awesome and hilarious