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That was a beautiful short fic! You wrote Robin really well. I like how she shows her motherly affection to Luffy and indulges him. Of course, Zoro should show up in times like this

This is so cute! I feel so much fluff just imagining Luffy doing Usopp's hair and the braid-train.

I love this Modern AU! Not so much the bullying part but I do get that it helps build the story and their relationship.

Hahahha amazing chapter ! It has everything I love ! The Strawhats and Sabo doing mischief is so funny ! OMG luffy was so freaking cute being all blushing and bashful and omg hiding under his hat was just too adorable Xd imagining him smiling shyly as well... so cute ! I almost wish he had his first crush just to see these faces and cute attitude he had Xd

You left a lot of hints right and left about ‘Sally’ - the way she talks, her apparence, the fact that she wasn’t scared by pirates, the weird wording you used sometimes to discribe things that felt out... nice doing !

At the beginning when luffy was staring at her, I was like ‘is there a meat stand next to her? Is she eating meat? Is she reading a book about meat?’ And then : ‘maybe she looks like Makino? Or someone else he knew ? It wouldn’t have been too far fetched if he had a little crush on a Makino-alike... ah no Ace was the one who had a crush on her Xd I was also wary of if she had bad intentions - not scared of pirates ? She is a weird civilian but it was definitely funny to see Nami, Usopp and Sanji trying to make luffy hook up with a pretty girl Xd I can imagine the smirks and comments during the whole conversation Xd poor luffy

I guessed it was Sabo the moment Zoro and Robin laughed out loud when he came to Sunny ;) he smiled at them and shared a look with them and Mr suspicious and mrs I-don’t-trust-you-straigh-away laugh like this ? Big give away for me :p I was like they know her? Or she has a weird devil fruit to make them trust her ? No, they know her, who could it - Sabo?! Wait is that Sabo? No way, it’s definitely Sabo! I can recognise Sabo! It’s Sabo ! Holy shit it’s Sabo ! Xd i was stuck on it for a little while and instead of keeping on reading, I needed to confirm It so went back up and re-read the beginning of the chapter

Pretty face, blond wavy hair, blue eyes, broad shoulders, tall (very tall!) but more importantly: strong hands which can crush steel... yep definitely Sabo :p but I thought that maybe Iva turned him into a girl for his mission Xd not just cross dressing :p oh well we all know Sabo is pretty :p I thought Robin is the only one who spent enough time with Sabo to recognise him and Zoro would recognise his Haki but the others wouldn’t have one or the other ;) seriously it was like a puzzle, all the stuffs that felt weird and all felt like everything just clicked once I re-read knowing it was Sabo :p

the only thing I wasn’t sure was if Luffy knew it was his brother or if he just had to have a crush on a girl because she looks like Sabo Xd wouldn’t be surprised by it - it would have been very funny if it was the case - luffy was acting way too weird for me to guess... until the sunset when he laid his head of Sabo’s shoulder... here I was yep Luffy knows :p

It was really hilarious to read Sabo showing himself and just kick ass (in a dress Xd where he hides a knife under the skirt Xd don’t know why but I can totally imagine Sabo doing this Xd)

Sanji being semi dead in the table later and Brook being all gloomy in a corner was hilarious - really liked how Sabo handled Sanji’s question / reaction - very Sabo-like with calmness and a hint of ‘watch out’ I don’t blame Sanji for his ‘bad reactions’ to Okamas since I think the people in Kamabakka really didn’t help during those two years (poor Sanji) I don’t recall Sanji having a problem with Bon Clay like this after all. Anyway at least with this, I don’t think there would be any problem between Sabo and Sanji - which is good cause I feel like Sabo is the kind of guy Sanji would get along with pretty well

The ending with Nami was perfect - I love how she proceeded the information about Sally-Sabo : it was hilarious ; she was so proud and felling all victorious (even high fived Usopp Xd) like yes I did it! I made it work for Luffy! Which turned into ‘ I tried to set him up with his big brother...?!’ Hahaha poor Nami Xd I can totally imagine her trying to hit Sabo several times - the way she does with her boys but unlike them, Sabo wouldn’t let her a hit in :p just the image in my head if these two like this... awww I didn’t know I needed a ‘Nami angry at a laughing Sabo’ scene until now :p I loved how she thinks she was tricked by a pretty face while usually people are tricked by her pretty face lol the bite me! At the end was glorious !

I half wished I didn’t know it was Sabo but still I can proudly say I recognised him alongside Robin and Zoro ;)

Thanks so much for this hilarious and adorable chapter full of Strawhats / Sabo thingy :p damnit Sabo fit in the Strawhats perfectly well :p

Oh my goooood i could definitely see sabo doing that, the devious lil shit! And all of usopp's barbs at sanji tho X;D 10/10

This...was absolutely hilarious! I actually had no idea that Sally was Sabo till the marines came (though I knew something was obviously up) and everyone's reactions were on point! Good job!

Aw, yea, some brother love and affection.

This was, for lack of a better word, /amazing/. I laughed so hard I almost rolled off the couch, and got weird looks from the entire family for the odd wheezing noises (that may or may not have sounded like a dying whale) I call laughter.
Keep up the good work, I adore it to bits
(I also had to go back and re-read ch 11 and 12 while I was here, I couldn't /not/. I love them to bits and pieces and also I can feel the abs forming)
~from a friendly little fan~

XD Oh my GOD, that was so unexpected!

For being crack it sure reads like a serious story ; ) A seriously cute story! I love it, it all makes a lot of sense. And Luffy really was being adorable, even if he wasn't actually smitten XD He's also being adorable when he actually is acting like he's with Sabo, I feel like I've hit the jackpot, lol
I was expecting Sally to be a government agent, not a revolutionary army agent, that was a great twist, made even better by the fact that it was /Sabo/ the whole time! Of course Luffy recognizes his own brother, no matter what he's wearing, haha, I love this for real
Thanks for writing this and posting it so I can enjoy it, you better believe I'll read this again and again- so thanks!

Lol, that was great! I guessed when you gave Sally man hands and stuff, so it was really funny to read it all.

Oh god, that was WAY too perfect! XD And I’m trying not to turn into a giggling idiot in the school hallway atm X) I was almost as embarrassed as Luffy near the beginning (curse you second-hand embarrassment!)

Okay, so I absolutely adored this story. I don't think my heart can take much more of this; you're one-shots are going to kill me :')

I love these kind of AUs with the dream memories! Honestly though, I am literally about to cry and I don't exactly know from which emotion :*)

I find this funny because Sabo's english VA, Vic Mignogna, is an accomplished singer and even sang the first english opening of One Piece.