Truly beautiful!

Wow, am I glad I was able to read both chapters at one time! I would n it have handled it well to only have the first chapter and not know how it ends! Wonderful writing again!

Perfect ending to an amazing story. I'm so happy that Olivia pulled through. The angst last chapter was really good, but this is just the perfect way to end this story. I loved it.

This was amazing. You beautifully packed a great deal into this wonderful story. Thanks for posting.

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This was so worth the wait! I got the email notification for the update over six hours ago but just now got a chance to read it and I'm so happy! Perfect ending :)

I loved this so much.

I didn't notice any mistakes! Wonderful work! I love how Rafael just dove in to caring for Noah while Liv was in the hospital, how he bonded with the boy. Rafi putting the bracelet on Liv and his sob when he heard Liv was awake was just wonderful, nice touch. Ending was brilliant. Great job!

Heartbreaking but you write this so so well, I'm just all BAWWWWWL.

Fix it fix it fix it!

Awesome

This brings up so many emotions, wow. Reading this broke my heart, but it so good and you wrote it so amazingly well. It is really heartbreaking but I love your writing, and this story is no different.

Look...I love angst as much as the next guy but jesus this was heart-wrenching! I'm sitting here in class trying not to cry! All kidding aside, I think this story is fantastic and your descriptive ability is too real. Poor Rafi and Noah! Ok, I'm going to go cry now but maybe your next story can be less tear-inducing? (it's fine if it's not b/c I'll probably read it anyway) Keep up the awesome work!

Beautiful. Can't blame her for wanting to go to the comfort and I love the fact that Rafael's voice is in her heaven. But please update and let her live! I also really enjoyed the Rafael and Lucia exchange.

Wow, very powerful 1st chapter. Please continue, can't wait for chapter 2.

I am on the verge of tears right now. Please continue.