They had sex in the pool

That was incredible, I wish they would have done that on the show.

Love this. I like stories about makeup sex.

This was so great, and so freaking hot as hell! Loved your take on this 5x13 scene extender! Haley coming out in that dress for Nathan was all kinds of fabulous and a fantastic set-up to their pool sex! Loved all the flirty banter and back and forth beforehand and sort of the pre-coital build up between Naley! You captured them wonderfully! Haley stripping in the kitchen and basically darting out to the pool was fantastic, and then Nathan slipping on the pool tiles in his haste to undress and get to Haley was one heck of an image, lol. Those two are just the absolute best!

And then what can I say about their sexy loving, except you captured the sweet and sexiness that is Naley superbly! Loved it indeed! You certainly have a knack for the greatness that is Naley smut, so this scene extension was no exception! Their pool loving was great and Haley's comment at the end that "Olivia was right, that swimming together naked was fun" was indeed classic, hehe. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful story, and I hope you have plenty more planned :)

Personally, im not big on the smut but i too had found that suggestion of skinny dipping in the show so worth showing or at least teasing us on show. Cool interpretation an keep up this awesome writing :)

Why didn't you told me that this was finished? OMG I LOVE IT! First, the start of the story was just right! It's beautifully written! The "no conversation/just description" part was just enough and I felt how much it's needed to have those mentioned so I love it! And freaking finally! The skinny dipping! I've wanted this for soo long! Thank you so much for feeding my imaginations! You're so awesome! I'm looking forward to reading more from you! :*

Loved it!

this was super sexy

So great. You write great Naley stories. Can't wait to read more things you write. Thx