that was completely adorable. i love it when she sticks up for herself and tries to get inuyasha to not kill the petty humans. always makes me giggle.

This is such a great one-shot! I hope you continue to write more!

I almost felt sorry for the bad guy:D Great job, this fic's amazing!

I found a spelling error, you used where instead of were. Also, I found the word usage of belched odd. Do you think that gagged, vomited, or the like would be better? I wish I could find more stories like this. I love Kagome's argument with Inuyasha, and how she realized that he was in a good mood funny.

I love these types of stories, where Kagome is in trouble, but doesn't care, 'cause Inuyasha will come looking for her soon enough, and there will be pain when he does.

This was amazing. You are amazing. I can't tell you how hard I cracked up when she was like; oh crap he's in a good mood! This was great! Thank you for sharing it!

This was great! Kagome tried to be nice, she tried to be considerate, but does anyone care? Nope!
The only thing that would have made this better was if the boss guy, when you were in his perspective, identified Inuyasha as some kind of nightmare. He's human, which means that at some point early in the fight he had been trying to classify Inuyasha as something. That panicked thought of "what the hell is he?" was missing from the internal monologue, and it made his mind feel a little less...complete. Thank you for writing this, I honestly enjoyed it so much!

Awww I loved this so muuuuch! And I'm stunned that this was your first attempt at a one shot; it was just so wonderfully written!

funny! Never want to be late if I worked for Inuyasha.

this was an amazing one shot! such a good job!

Very cute!

Oh gosh what an awesome story! I love how he bends so easily to Kagome but he's such a powerhouse! This was a joy to read! I like he idea a lot that she has to fight to even stay. Makes me wonder what had Inuyasha in such a good mood.

Love,
Grapefruit Wannabe

Quite an enjoyable story. There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing so big it distracted from your story. I'm sure I'd enjoy any other one shots you may come out with in the future.