| Reviews for Sister in law, to sister in love! |
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AJGuardian chapter 1 . 12/1/2019 Master Eugenicist Hiashi Hyuuga. For the Hyuuga Master Plan. If you don't get the reference look it up. Its pretty funny. |
Silverknight26 chapter 4 . 1/3/2019 Update please~ xd I can't wait for another chapter |
Guest chapter 4 . 8/3/2017 maybe both pregnant naruto Lot more chapters great |
trafalgarlaw10 chapter 4 . 12/8/2016 This story sure escalated quickly :O Lol |
trafalgarlaw10 chapter 2 . 12/8/2016 Loved the Naruhina moments. It was hilarious that Hanabi was imagining her sister naked and not Naruto. Lol |
trafalgarlaw10 chapter 1 . 12/8/2016 Lovely story. I've been looking for a fic like this. It's interesting reading it from Hanabi's point of view and I like it. This story gives me a sort of realistic feel as if this is what happened really happened prior to the wedding. Well done! |
Shawa chapter 2 . 12/6/2016 Please, for everything that is sacred, get a beta. Your ideas seem nice, but you really can't write. |
Brehze chapter 4 . 12/4/2016 Great chapter |
JustLucky05 chapter 4 . 12/4/2016 Absolutely wonderful! I am glad that they got to an understanding. Hanabi shouldn't be so hard on herself, she has many qualities that others would love. I can't wait to see what happens between her and Naruto. Keep up the great work. |
te.nellis chapter 4 . 12/3/2016 Awesome chapter! Keep it up! |
WindyCitySlayer1 chapter 4 . 12/3/2016 Awesome |
InARealPickle chapter 1 . 12/3/2016 There is nothing worse than trying to read a story with terrible grammar. The reader has to spend the entire time mentally fixing the constant mistakes. This means they can not get lost in the story... there is no enjoyment. I have had better experiences translating stories from other languages to English. At least I know in advance I will have to work at it to understand the story. |
Brehze chapter 3 . 12/1/2016 Great chapter |
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 11/22/2016 Well, you need a new beta. For something that had supposedly been beta'd it was bad. Also, do you realize you used "giggled" like 50 times? That is bad writing right there. |
ferduran chapter 3 . 11/11/2016 I wonder how the public had not recognized Naruto yet? |