Sorry that this review is so late, I've busy with stuff and I'm just lazy.

The chapter was alright and I think there may have been a typo or two. Also, I don't feel like a lot happened in this chapter. I wonder why MrZ is taking people as slaves, is he just an asshole? Probably.

Again, sorry for the late review and that it wasn't very in depth but I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.

Yay! You updated! I gotta say, I'm liking the way things are going. MrZ is still an absolute jerk, and we get a name to the face of Jenkinzez attacker. I look forward to the next chapter,...
kitling.

Sorry I'm a day late with this review.

I'll start off by saying that I don't think you load arrows in pistons, disperencers would make more sence to me. Not a whole lot happened but we got a better description of the city and MrZ. I wonder what will happen with that fire aspect boom? And what happened to that guy in the last chapter, will he show up again? Who knows.

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.

Sorry I took so long to review this chapter, I've been busy with exams and shit. Anyway, great chapter! Really enjoying this story, can't think of any criticisms this time, which is always a good sign. And I don't know why but I keep picturing MrZ with a really posh voice.

Dark. That escalated in darkness SO quickly.

Really enjoying this story so far,there's just something charming about it. If I had to give any criticism it would be height, how could Jenkinzez jump into a chasm without dying, and how high as well as steep was that cliff next to the city cause it sounded like it was pretty high up to me.

Anyway, Great work, looking forward to the next chapter.

Pressure plates, what can ya' do, amirite? \_(ツ)_/

Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter, looking forward to the next one. I like the dynamic between Buggy and Jenkinzez. I got to say, I went back and re-read your Author's Note at the beginning, and I'm really curious as to what this "DragoCraft Incident" was. I can already tell in this chapter that we're already starting to get the build-up to something.

"Buggy... We're not in Kansas anymore!"

Great chapter! This is some truly great stuff. I'm very interested in where this story is going.

Love it. Characters are fantastically well written for their ages. They match the upbringing they've received. Perfect.

Another chapter please!

I like it. The concept so far seems interesting and I find myself looking forward to the next chapters and where you go from here. All in all, I'm eager to see what happens next. :)

Marvelous. Truly marvelous.
Now, I'm not even gonna pretend to be a Minecraft fan( never understood that game), but if it had a story like this backing it, I'd play it in a heartbeat.( Then, again, creepers are demonized in canon so the story wouldn't be EXACTLY like this.) That said , I LOVED this , kitling. Fleshed out characters, a stirring and sympathetic conflict, an unlikely hero...it's got it all. Plus you know I'm a sucker for stories that give the "villains" perspective. You're gonna go far, kid.
Ciao,
Requiem the Eternal

Pretty good prologue. Written very well, looking forward to the next chapter.