Thank you for the wonderful story

well capturing legendary pokemon and pearlshipping was good though i would recommend two shot of aftermath for
remath between ash and tobias. ikinda expected him to be
a champian of his home region kanto

So far, this is absolutely fantastic. I enjoy your style a lot and your character development is incredible. I feel lucky to have found this tome. It is a low chance to find such an amazing read on this website, and stumbling upon it was a very lucky find indeed. Cheers!

Shadow puch doesn’t miss?

Shadow punch doesn’t miss? Are you sure

May I ask why dis Ash stop team rocket from capturing wild pokemon? They are wild pokemon. They are not stealing

Dawn didn’t have to know about Moltres. Ash even promised to Moltres that he will not tell on it

gym leaders pokemon provided by the league? What? haha i know its a fanfiction but still
That’s really not how gymleader system work haha

And conference every 6 months? Lol first time I read this idea. Lol

Last one, ash not required to get all badges again? I know thats how it is in the games, but come on, thats just so you can grind levels on the elite four.

Lol

Lol ash always saying he’s the only one who can get to someone. What is ash, an psychologist?

Lol very original jacen

I skipped the battle. Boring

So despite Ash’s training in mt. Silver he still thinks the same way as others about type effectiveness when he had actually proven before that type is not everything. And Pikachu can’t finish the battle quicker? Nice training

Lololololol you are so against this Jacen guy when he is actually cool that way lol you really have poor taste

Lol there is christmas. Do you even know what Christmas is? Haha

I know it existed in the anime but that too is dumb and you don’t have to add it in your story lol

Again. Do the idea of Christmas co-exist with Arcues? Haha

Your readers are no kids

What was the reason Riley trained Ash again? Just to pass knowledge on? Nice