good story but I'm with J'onn on this. I'm still not entirely convinced it was just an accident.

Great story!

Sorry didn't review much but did read & enjoy all five chapters. Thanks for the story!

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POST PLEASE! YOU ARE MAKING ME CRY!

I'm wondering if Jeremiah will be Cyborg Superman. "I appreciate that, but something tells me there isn't enough room in your social calendar." - jealous Alex; "True. It's a shame though. We really need that coffee maker." - ha Jonn. I wonder how many times Alex will beat Jonn's babysitting supervision? It'd be cute to see Alex trying to bribe other agents into helping her stay longer. Poor Alex getting rain checked again; I wonder how many more times that'll happen before Supergirl shows up to have a word with Detective Sawyer? It'd be cute seeing Kara say "I've got this." to a call or helping a S.W.A.T. team so Maggie can have time with Alex.

I don't know if Winn getting Mon is a good thing or not, it's certainly not good for Jonn if they sneak out again. Hopefully Alex remembers to order her own potstickers so she can actually have some; I don't think she's going to have fight hard to get the ice cream okayed. :) A cute update; I look forward to any sequels!

It's so good! I'm just loving your writing!

Kara just forgets her own strength at times; "You really don't get this detecting thing do you?" well played Maggie. I'm sure Maggie is raising Alex's blood pressure too but in a more enjoyable way than Eliza, ha. "You can leave me." - ha Alex! Maggie using the "Gremlins" approach to Alex was funny; you say Alex can't do it one handed Maggie but she'll give many goes before conceding. I wonder what Maggie's question was?

I love Eliza breaking down and telling Alex why she's so overprotective right now. Awe Alex sent Kara to play backup for Maggie! Oh Maggie Alex has trained Kara well on how to ignore gruffness, you can say nothing to Kara she hasn't already dealt with with Alex. Was Maggie investigating Alex's case for her...was that why she was at the warehouse? If so that's sweet! Oh Maggie you're such an Alex at times; "I didn't kill my boss so good I think." - but she thought about it probably. It's nice to see Alex and Eliza having a good moment; "What is she stalking you?" - ha at jealous Kara! Awe poor Kara, I picture her face being all happy and excited thinking Maggie would be a source for her and then being sad because she said she wouldn't go on record. Noonan's is totally acceptable, but don't think Kara won't play that dark alley card at least once. :)

Poor Alex hearing about Maggie on a date with someone who's not her. Another enjoyable update; I look forward to the next!

love it

"Because I don't have Kara's ability to fly". What a perfect answer from sassy Alex, LOL. I'm glad she's starting to realize that she's important too and Eliza is showing Alex how much she's loved. I'm curios as to whether or not Alex did see Jeremiah. Having found only one set of tracks means nothing, he could have been flying since this is Cadmus...

"I'll stay with her." - well there goes Alex's blood pressure! Poor Alex missing Jeremiah; "Tell me the Ducati is okay." - nice flirty line for Alex Maggie but not the best way to win Eliza over...again there goes Alex's ratings. :) "Don't think we're done discussing the bike." - poor Alex. No badge Maggie, but you get an Alex and that's better than a badge. Maggie is just doing Alex's head in with all the thoughts and emotions she creating; I wonder what Eliza thinks of Maggie so far - she did inform her about Alex having the bike.

Ooh Snapper letting Kara have it, he has points but unloading regarding Alex isn't the best choice as if Kara is going to get protective over anything it'd be Alex. I'm going to say Lena knows Kara is Supergirl and wants to show her that while they disagree on some topics she's not a bad person over all - she's not her brother or Max. Maybe someone sabotaged the vehicle Alex was in? Mandatory time away...poor Kara because Alex is going to drive her nuts asking for the latest mission updates; maybe she can have Eliza and Maggie distract her at times. :) A cute update; I look forward to the next!

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Another great chapter! You definitely got my interest! I wonder what really happened in the "crash"...

This is so good! You have Maggie (her spot on dialogue had me laughing) so well placed with her words as with the other characters I can easily see this is an episode. I am really enjoying your story. Thanks.

Poor Kara feeling guilty; I wonder how Maggie will feel when she finds out? I love daddy-Jonn. Kara mentioning Eliza is not going to help Alex's condition right then; don't excite Alex - that means no Eliza for stress reasons and no Maggie for increased heart rate reasons. Awe Kara and Alex...love the Danvers sisters!