oh fuck, i heavily appriciate the fact that you have ed amd al as homunculus with out getting rid of their core personality traits.
i see that too many times in other homunculus fics and honestly it kinda kills the joy of originality.
needless to say, im really happy with this story.

The story is interesting and a good one, I look forward to more.

Are the Eleic Brothers still able to be human sacrafices for th Dwarf in the flask?

I like the story, but why on earth is dialogue in bold?
It's incredibly distracting and disrupts the text, I'd understand if it was to signify someone speaking a non native language and that it's been translated for the reader... but it's not.
I can understand it for the point of editing and whatnot, but once it's been approved and ready to post, why not just make it all the same?
Write on:)

Can't wait for an upadet XD
Excited for more XD

This is really good XD
Can't wait for an update XD
Excited to see where you take this XD

Now this have caught my attention and I'm loving it! Hope to see this more in the future.
Keep it real ;)

this seems very interesting. continue please