stunning
i'm out of words after reading this
i mean how do you write so heavenly?

This was fantastic, definitely indulging in your longer stories, all the characters were spot on and well written and the progression was great!

(smiles) this feels so touching that it makes my heart light, serena and ash make an adorable, sweet, strong, spicy, toughing couple... great job on this amourshipping chapter, and as fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

nice

oh my goddddd this was simply brilliant.! wohoooo *claps

Since Thursday I have been hoping to read a one-shot where I get to read something after the escalator moment..

I loved how you showed the time gap so nicely..and Ash being the gentleman, Clemont and Bonnie being the understanding siblings and Serena being herself..but more confident..

Amazing OS.. loved it sooo sooooo much..

worth everything! 3

Great way to tie up the ending in the anime. The loyalty between Ash and Serena is just beautiful, and the snapshots of their lives and growth with their friends, leading to the discovery of Ash and Serena being together, is executed really well. Really admire this kind of work from you. Great job!

I enjoy stuff like this! Well done

Not bad.