Reviews for Even the Strongest Fall—Part 2: Into the Depths
Guest chapter 9 . 1/6/2017
Another excellent chapter. Well done to Gordon on his first solo mission!
Keep at it! Really enjoying reading :) xx
Guest chapter 9 . 12/31/2016
I love this series so much! I can't wait for another instalment!
Also, I feel like I would enjoy reading something to do with Virgil... no worries though, write whatever you want to :)
Guest chapter 9 . 12/29/2016
I've enjoyed this series so much! I really hope you do Virgil next!
coralie14 chapter 9 . 12/29/2016
What a great resolution. A little disappointed that the story is finished. Have you any stories planned as I look forward to reading more from you.
DarkestWolfx chapter 1 . 12/21/2016
Beautiful writing! A lovely idea too.
coralie14 chapter 8 . 12/19/2016
So everyone knows that Gordon is having trouble coping.
My favourite part was the flash back. It showed Gordon's fighting spirit, love to the family. His wonder about the Christmas presents showed me his dedication to do the best for each member of the family.
Glad Virgil and Gordon have started to sort their issues.
Another good chapter and I look forward to the next chapter.
MajorHistocompatibilityComplex chapter 8 . 12/19/2016
Glad Gordon got to go up on 5! Would have been bad for him not to go. I always do a double take when Gordon's mind drifts back to the accident. I like it :)
Overall another excellent chapter and looking forward to the first rescue the boys have to go on :D xx
coralie14 chapter 7 . 12/13/2016
Glad that two other brothers know what is going on with Gordon and one even has some experience with what he is going through. Glad we may learn some more about the incident from the flash backs in the next chapter.
Really like how you are writing this. I feel for both Gordon and the family.
MajorHistocompatibilityComplex chapter 7 . 12/13/2016
Throughly enjoyed reading that, well worth the wait! Excellent tie in with Scott and also introducing a new character! Story is picking up, exciting times nice one :)
MajorHistocompatibilityComplex chapter 6 . 12/7/2016
Mate! Glad they got that somewhere. So impressed with your writing, i can relate so well to Gordon's reactions. They aren't over the top and totally realistic in my opinion. Throughly enjoying it and looking forward to the next chapter.
MajorHistocompatibilityComplex chapter 5 . 12/7/2016
Quality Jeff talk loving it! Really excited to see where the story goes. You've captured the claustrophobia and his problems with such precision.
MajorHistocompatibilityComplex chapter 4 . 12/7/2016
I love the seamless merge between reality and Gordon remembering the accident. Haven't read a fic focussing on the cusp of the thunderbirds being founded. Super enjoying it and your writing it amazing!
MajorHistocompatibilityComplex chapter 3 . 12/6/2016
Excellent writing, it's a rare find something with a good story line and good portrayal so well done!
MajorHistocompatibilityComplex chapter 2 . 12/6/2016
Excellent writing style and flow of the story, it defiantly has momentum and I like that in a story
coralie14 chapter 6 . 12/5/2016
This was very well written. The interaction with both Virgil and Jeff was great. I liked the fight and the fact that Gordon was able to voice his concerns and Jeff admitted that he was scared to lose him.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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