It’s a great story

Wow, your version of Ahsoka is so... feral. Wild, untamed, just like an Akul. I was a bit surprised by your take on her relationship with Anakin, doubled with the indifference she displays at bedding her lover/big brother's son, but hey, that's fanfiction :) I also wouldn't tend to think she would hate the Jedi so fiercely, but then again, to everyone their own opinion. I really loved how she talked about Obi-Wan however - their relationship is very important to me. And the part on Yoda made me laugh x)

I skipped most of this once I found out it went against my morals (as in, stay a virgin and if anyone tries to take your virginity from you RUN THEM THROUGH WITH A LIGHTSABER).
Also, I think you might want a beta who can spot typos.
Otherwise, good job.