I may not like Amour, but this is really good! I love the suspense and emotion in angst fics and you seem to execute this really well.
10/10
~Obsidian

Probably did not get the feeling of stomach dropping, but it was too much intriguing to not ignore and to not enjoy. I absolutely enjoyed it. Though, I agree it was quiet confusing in the end, but that part of possession, it was a nice concept and I absolutely loved reading this one-shot. It makes me want to read "Scooby Doo: Legends of Eclipse".

Just to let you know I have never read a crossover of Pokemon with any other series (or a single crossover) in my life even for once. This is going to be first one and I am glad that it suits my taste as well. I am going to enjoy that as much as I enjoyed this one-shot.

Good job.

OAO OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH POOR ASHY AND SERENA THEYRE GONNA HAVE NIGHTMARES FOR LIFE AAAAAAAGGGGGGHHHHHHH!
*cough* uh, ahem, I love this One-Shot though, Happy Halloween!