Reviews for The Wait |
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BlackBear53 chapter 3 . 3/8/2017 Very nice! Love the "therapy" dog. LOL |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/25/2017 French fan I think bringing Monty at the hospital was a Wonderful Idea And it is very funny that deeks is an undercover cop but has been caught by thé nurse ! Also funny with the Kensi desk I thought one day, she would have the best desk thanks to deeks (in the show, he is so alone, he bas cleaned thé garage and i thought if hé is so Boeing hé will phone 'michele in order to ask 'may i help you?'... and sam would discover it') |
sassyzazzi chapter 3 . 2/26/2017 Just loved this, wonderful chapter, wonderful that Monty appeared , and just loved the ending. Thanks for writing this. |
RhondaLara chapter 3 . 2/26/2017 Love That Monty! |
Psyched chapter 3 . 2/26/2017 Aww, what a sweet ending. Poor Monty certainly has gotten the shaft in all this Densi drama, hasn't he? I'd love to see the old boy again on the show sometime. Maybe when Deeks proposes next time he'll have Monty with them and start with something like, "So Monty and I were talking, and..." |
Psyched chapter 2 . 2/26/2017 Not sure how I managed to miss chapter 2, but apparently I did. Guess I get twice the reading pleasure today! "You shouldn't frown because you'll get wrinkles and then you'll need Botox" LOL and SOOO freaking Deeks! I can totally hear him saying that. Honestly, I can so clearly hear his voice saying everything you've written here, you do a really great job with his dialogue, umm, monologue. Nice job too with capturing Hetty's voice and Deeks' internal struggle and stress over Kensi's situation. |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/16/2017 French fan Very realistic. First, i thought callen and sam will find him when he slept or when he did not eat |
anonkp chapter 2 . 1/18/2017 Nice work! |
Marcy chapter 2 . 1/15/2017 Enjoying. Please continue |
RhondaLara chapter 2 . 1/16/2017 Lovely! Love Our Deeks! |
gremlin2318 chapter 2 . 1/16/2017 I am loving this story! Great writing! |
Max and Fern 4ever chapter 2 . 1/15/2017 Really good chapter. Glad Kensi is awake now! |
sassyzazzi chapter 2 . 1/15/2017 Good chapter, loved Deeks telling Kensi the streaking story! |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2016 French fan Your chapter could be In the tv show. Perfect |
Hoosier65 chapter 1 . 10/31/2016 nice |