Reviews for The Wait
BlackBear53 chapter 3 . 3/8/2017
Very nice! Love the "therapy" dog. LOL
Guest chapter 3 . 2/25/2017
French fan
I think bringing Monty at the hospital was a Wonderful Idea

And it is very funny that deeks is an undercover cop but has been caught by thé nurse !

Also funny with the Kensi desk

I thought one day, she would have the best desk thanks to deeks (in the show, he is so alone, he bas cleaned thé garage and i thought if hé is so Boeing hé will phone 'michele in order to ask 'may i help you?'... and sam would discover it')
sassyzazzi chapter 3 . 2/26/2017
Just loved this, wonderful chapter, wonderful that Monty appeared , and just loved the ending. Thanks for writing this.
RhondaLara chapter 3 . 2/26/2017
Love That Monty!
Psyched chapter 3 . 2/26/2017
Aww, what a sweet ending. Poor Monty certainly has gotten the shaft in all this Densi drama, hasn't he? I'd love to see the old boy again on the show sometime. Maybe when Deeks proposes next time he'll have Monty with them and start with something like, "So Monty and I were talking, and..."
Psyched chapter 2 . 2/26/2017
Not sure how I managed to miss chapter 2, but apparently I did. Guess I get twice the reading pleasure today!

"You shouldn't frown because you'll get wrinkles and then you'll need Botox" LOL and SOOO freaking Deeks! I can totally hear him saying that. Honestly, I can so clearly hear his voice saying everything you've written here, you do a really great job with his dialogue, umm, monologue. Nice job too with capturing Hetty's voice and Deeks' internal struggle and stress over Kensi's situation.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/16/2017
French fan

Very realistic.

First, i thought callen and sam will find him when he slept or when he did not eat
anonkp chapter 2 . 1/18/2017
Nice work!
Marcy chapter 2 . 1/15/2017
Enjoying. Please continue
RhondaLara chapter 2 . 1/16/2017
Lovely! Love Our Deeks!
gremlin2318 chapter 2 . 1/16/2017
I am loving this story! Great writing!
Max and Fern 4ever chapter 2 . 1/15/2017
Really good chapter. Glad Kensi is awake now!
sassyzazzi chapter 2 . 1/15/2017
Good chapter, loved Deeks telling Kensi the streaking story!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2016
French fan

Your chapter could be In the tv show. Perfect
Hoosier65 chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
nice
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