| Reviews for Building Something New |
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Evelyn1563 chapter 26 . 6/22 Getting good |
Mite3 chapter 26 . 5/31 Never read one of these fnaf fanfics, gotta say, glad i read yours first. it was really good. |
Eternal Violets chapter 26 . 5/21 Hey,buddy. I hope everything is going well for you as well. Please,take your time and do what you gotta do. Another amazing chapter btw stay safe out there and stay Icy Kyurem. Peace |
Nobu Glover Rivera chapter 25 . 4/15 Dang it, I binged through this so fast and now that I hit a wall I feel empty ;c, hope you update soon~ |
Tito chapter 25 . 4/11 BROTHERHOOD AND UNITY |
Eternal Violets chapter 25 . 4/10 Well...that got real I also suppose you're no longer Blazing huh. Now you're literally chilling I wonder if you'll be Swimming or Diving another awesome chapter btw. Hopefully,Michael will come around and help Steve. I also hope you're staying safe out there too until next time,stay cool Peace. |
random reader768 chapter 25 . 4/10 Yes! Don't give up! But the logistics of moving all the bots to some place same is going to be a concern. |
Victor John Foxfire chapter 25 . 4/10 ...If I were Steve, I would have given Micheal this BIG, armor piercing Response. "Did you even TRY Making Friends with them? Or did you blindly follow that Tentacle Freak to the letter, because from what I can see, and from what you're demanding of me, you only followed orders from that Bastard like a Good little drone, EXACTLY like what Daddy dearest wanted of YOU." Why would I tell him that? Because his idea of "WAKE UP", is to blindly listen to the orders of Hand Unit, aka, Ennard. He's following his Psychotic Daddy's orders, to the letter, rather than seeing how much fate has already been changed. Why would I say Fate has been changed? Well, From the Arrival, to the middle, there are so many changes to the story. Baby is being controlled, Ennard is a separate entity, Foxy can be reasoned with as well as being female along with being a tsundere, Freddy is a gullible moron, and the Badge is a Shock device. All this is basically showing the winds of change, and the alteration of fate in general. The idea of hiding the robots, is another one. "Have you never thought of Cosplay, Jackwad? Give them an outfit like that of the Stormtroopers and droids from star wars, and aside from funny looks, we'll get by as an apparent performance group. My only problem is Ennard. Can't get the Shell Fabricators working with that Tentacly bugger in the way." Seriously, it's one Idea I had hovering in my head for ages, that rather than getting out with a skin suit and combining, they escape with suits of armor that make them look either like Star Wars characters or Crusader knights in armor, via the animatronic Shell Fabricators. In this story, the only thing stopping them, is Ennard, the Afton Robotics staff, and apparently, Steve's own stupidity, since he's thinking too small. And yes, I said "Shell Fabricators", the Facility, canonically, is incredibly advanced, and looks more like a factory, most obvious when moving Baby's empty shell to the scooping room, meaning it allows for the manufacture of spare parts and outfits for the animatronics, and potentially, new animatronics. Steve CAN change fate. He just needs to think more, and be more imaginative. All my ideas I have, is by simply imagining and thinking up alternate scenarios via someone actually using their brain, so I feel that if Steve would do us a favour and dust off the cobwebs to get his brain thinking and idea engine running, he can actually save them, with, or without Michael's help. Especially since it feels like he's just here to be a complete Bumhole. |
Eternal Violets chapter 24 . 2/15 Groudon continues to BLAZE! its good to hear from you,old friend. I hope the new year is treating you well,so far. I believe that Steve and Michael can save them. Keep being awesome and Blazing,Groudon lol xD take your time,you're a good person,I already know until next time,peace |
Just a Nameless man chapter 24 . 2/15 great chapter, like always; it's a good work |
Zike chapter 23 . 1/18 Woah, nice story. Did Michael will get scooped ? And what’s the postits for ? Did the animatronics who get destroyed will come back somehow ? So many question and I hope you will get a new chapter soon. |
Hu chapter 23 . 12/26/2019 Great story ! I can't wait for what's next ! |
Gamerchanger chapter 23 . 12/10/2019 Are you going to update soon? |
Gamerchanger202 chapter 23 . 12/3/2019 Awesome chapter! |
Soul Savant chapter 23 . 10/21/2019 This is a great story... Man, what's going to happen next? You seem to really like to torture your Oc though XD. Looking forward to the next chapter! |