These are great fics - I really like the addition of Cara, the pet deathclaw and the clever use of ghoulification - very creative and has taken the Fallout world in a new direction that has been both plausible and interesting to explore! Thanks for writing. Off to part 4!

I'm enjoying this story quite a lot. One tiny thing: in the author's note at the beginning of chapter 3 you kindda reveal what's gonna happen next...I would edit or delete it to avoid revealing informationOther than that, great job

Part four soon? Please? I am thoroughly enjoying From Cali to Commonwealth, but I figured I'd read some of your other stuff, I really really REALLY am enjoying your take on FO4. Keep it up!

This is a really cool story, but you do know Deacon isn't a synth, right? He was lying about that.

Your story is AMAZING. I have never been so hooked on anything so tightly before. I think I finished all three parts in one day. I'm slowly dying waiting for the next.

the supermutant experiments were even worse that what she assumed. they werent just experimenting on the mutants, they were experimenting with the FEV, meaning they didnt kidnap supermutants for their experiments...they made them. i mean, they had to find a use for all those people they kidnapped to replace with synths, didnt they? (makes me scared to think about what they're doing with them now. after they were done with the supermutants, they just dumped them out above ground, and didnt think twice that they just unleashed an army of psychotic supermen that, after a mindbreakingly painful mutation and excruciating tests, would have a universal hatred of humans. after all, the people on the surface arent really human, are they? theres already so much up there trying to kill them, one more thing wont matter. in fact, sending the supermutants there would be merciful, by killing them quicker.

that kind of thinking is why i didnt feel too bad about turning the institute into a steaming hole in the ground. the only thing i didnt like about it, was it would have been smarter to just take it over and make more synths without the kidnapping bit, if only to help rebuild and retake the surface, but i suppose the railroad isnt made up of the smartest tools in the shed, eh?

Love! Thanks for the update!

I loved all 3 of these, I really hope there are more! Was not ready for it to be over!

so I just binged on all three parts of the story and I absolutely love it. kind of playing on the game along with it lol. can't wait until the next chapter!

technically, she was still only frozen for 210 years, as its 2287-ish in the game. shaun was just unfrozen 60 years earlier than her, around 2227

Really great! I've loved this story so far, keep it up!

I'm so in love is this story!

I would've gone for a Mr. Cuddlesworth for the Deathclaw's name... He'd get big and strong, and would get a top hat for his coming of age day, and he'd be the greatest thing next to the Mini Nuke against Raiders and Gunners. :3