This is the ending that should have happened ! I feel like the writers did a bad job of developing Max and Phoebe's sibling relationship(Incest Is GROSS -_- ) through the series! And the season finale arc , upset me so much! Phoebe should have taken most of the blame in what happened, and yet it's never addressed ? I know Nick doesn't have really good shows anymore but if they really focused on those two and how they grew to become better heroes due to having each other . I mean I honestly feel like there alot of times where Phoebe lacks faith in Max, and makes wrong assumptions. The show's already into their season 4 , so I don't know what can be done... But I applaud for writing and ending that honestly should have happened ...

I loves this fic already, it's juicy & on point. I even developed an idea from it, good job! Keep up the good work too, man

! As this is my OTP tag on tumblr, I knew I'd love it before I ever started reading it, haha. This was probably the most on-the-nose fanfic I've read for the thundermans, like, ever. A little bit rule-breaky - with cursing and Max and Phoebe sharing a bed, if only platonically (but let's be real it probably will never happen on the show) - but still character and plot driven enough to almost feel canon. These are my favorite types of fics, the ones that explore character feelings without breaking what the audience true canon. I'm so happy you addressed Phoebe's wrongdoings in the finale, because there are definitely more than she or others are willing to admit. I'm glad that Colosso could get her to see that if Max is going to take accountability for his actions, then she needs to as well. (Is forgotten that she read his chronicle and that wasn't even something she ever felt bad about or that he ever found out, even though it was literally the reversed plot of One Hit Thunder). My favorite part, though, had to be the ending where Max asked her to take over the world with him because THE WORLD IS FULL OF EVIL AND THEY'RE THE ONLY ONES EHO CAN SAVE EVERYONE. looking to Colosso for support immediately after was such a Max thing to do, and, look at that, I guess the Max/Colosso thing is real :)

That was brilliant! A very realistic look at what might have happened that night.

I just- Wow! I'm always insanely impressed with your stories, but this one just really hit home ya know? I talk on my IG all the time about how unfair it is for Max in that house and I was especially angered after the finale, but you, you put my anger and sadness and fears all into one story and I couldn't be happier with it. I love it so much, it touched me in ways you don't even know! You're amazing and I can't wait to read more from you!

Update please

You're such a good writer. Can you write something super super angsty? Like extreme angst with Max's character. Maybe him having depression.

It was good but you shouldve ended it at the thundertwin swear