This needs real smut. Story is awfully mediocre without it.

Luna's speech hits really hard

That was a good story. It's not going in my favorites but it was an interesting and enjoyable story.

This Story makes me wish, that there was a Super Favorite Option.
The Author did make some Typos, but oh well, it was a ride.

Nice chapter. I like how you made Luna overload and become a cute mess. Keep up the good work.

I knew Cedric was a vampire...

I say this with utmost certainty: This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Kudos to you!

Super cracky lol but Bill Hicks is an American Treasure so you get an instant 100%! —Just an observer

my gods this was the most brilliant story ever! i just loved it. you are such an amazing writer! my gods i couldn't stop laughing! keep writing and blessed be!

Quite witty! Sometimes a bit slapstick. Nicely done.

Awesome story! I enjoyed every minute of it!

On the one hand, the grammar leaves much to be desired, and most of this looks like a rough draft.
On the other hand, the story content itself was amazing and I loved the foreshadowing. It was nice and subtle, but still easy to catch. Saw the final twist coming the second I read the instruments fail again, and absolutely loved it. Keep it up, I would love to read your original work. Please let me know when it is published!

such a hilarious and sweet story.

Thank you for the story. It's original and funny.
I love this Harry/Luna, so sweet.

Ok, that was some funny stuff ;) I really enjoyed it.