I really want to love this fic. I really do. Techincally it fits what i want, a character who use a deck that was actually printed instead of oc and showing how powerful the oc compare to anime character using better deck strategy.

But by god as the previous reviewer said this is just bland. There is just not enough plot to goes around and there is not enough emotion and reaction to the plot to cares what's going on. It is all just felt so dull.

This fic have high potential and i have high hope. But in the end, you blew it away.

I re-read your whole fanfic, and, this is my opinion, you could try rewrite it a bit. I'm sure you can make it a bit cleaner and better. I believe in you, my friend. :)

This was an interesting chapter, but I have some pointers.

I feel a bit like Caius is a bit too powerful. I can't remember if he have ever lost once, just to create some kind of balance among victories and losses.
And if Estelle's supposed to be the Queen of Games, then she should've given Caius a harder challenge. You do know you can modify her Deck with your own ideas, adding new Monsters, Spell and Trap cards, but her main monsters are dragons, spellcasters and warriors.
Another thing is that you don't have to put Spell cards face-down. You can play them automatically from your hands. However, Quick-Play cards can be set and used just as Trap cards, activating them during the opponent's turn.

yeah it feels bland

It's a great fic...but it feels, bland

It was a very nice way to introduce Estelle in your fanfic. You've captured her perfectly.
And if you want to, you can use my version of Star Eater's evolved form; Miracle Star Dragon.

I wish I could help with the custom card, but I'm out of ideas.

But if you need a character for Yusei's whife and their child/children, I can lend you some OCs.

Siilva can't be summoned that way. Tricky's effect to special summon by discarding is a cost.

I want to see more of this. :)

Please do more

Please man this is a really good fiction

Yes I would like to see a new chapter. but with a precise difference. I would personally like to see more moment between Akiza and Caius as a couple. kind how to progress their relationship, the small problems of everyday life they had to face (for example: little cones who still have the bad action of Akiza like the black rose across the throat) how it is spent the pregnancy and other small detail all stupid. but that make the couple beautiful. just see them together face problems and defeat them.

I would like you to continue this fanfic

Continue this fanfic, it reminds me of the early chapters of one of my fics. I love this fanfic

I would like for you to continue this fic