If I'm not wrong ainz knows around a 1000 spells,given 300 as igdrasils game limit and 700 other spells through items he bought.
As for mages they require large intelligent stat to acquire such vast spell to with ainz normal stats plus the special items he bought would have considerable increase his stat. When transported to the new world would have undoubtedly make changes to his psyche .

Pretty good, since you didn't use Neia it was a little silly to add her being pope at the end since she had no contact with ainz

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Lo que decís es que la continuacion de este volumen es el volumen 13?

Some of the name translations are questionable and the grammar could use a little work.

Otherwise solid alternative to the canon.

Ps. Grid kings is undoubtedly meant to be Greed kings.

Really nice, i really enjoyed the Story. By the way what the Name of your Website ?

Okay this intermission was short, but was an intermission. There was still a lot in it, especially the introduction of the Dragon Kingdom and the fact that everyone is going to the Sorcerer King for help. They really should just bow down now.

With this chapter, it might have been nice to get a reminder who Kraus was, or an introduction and some further background. Especially since when you introduce Kraus it's in one line, about half way down, after he's already spoken. It was a bit jolting to have to go back and connect the name to the Black Scripture member. I am guitly of this myself when i don't think of the name for the person right at first, and then intro them later, so I know how it happens :D

Still interesting but more background with this chapter, and a bit more feeling would have added depth to the conversation. Though you do have a knack for conversations!

I have to agree with the Theocracy's representative about the comment with all the brothers and sisters and everything! I mean, he doesn't know they are lying through their teeth and it was a nice way to use Aura and Mare as an example of a loyal sibling set but that just means... Oh shizen! Is there a lot of other bad ones out there :D

Looking forward to the fight between Jaldaboath and Ainz though and Demiurge advising. That is very lol-able :D

The bit with the Adventurers is well done. I think this is the first time I've seen the maze completed, though I do intend to complete it in my work, I hadn't given a lot of thought as to how it should be organised. There might be a yoink happening :P I will ask if I do though.

Good work again, the plot is still moving well at this point but you have given me warning :d I'm sure it will be an exaggerated warning though.

Okay, got some more free time to read another chapter. :D

Obviously the kicker in this chapter is the growth in Demiurge's family with his gaining a brother! Yay! Demiurge you sneak! You should have said... Or rather your parents should have... Ulbert! Bad Ulbert, you should have told Momonga you were expanding... :D Anyway

In as much as the Slane Theocracy is a human supremist country, they have recognised their limits in the LN so the logic given was good for them to try to open trade. They could also throw in their God of Darkness and say that they understand that some undead are above the usual prejudice. I think there would have to be some restrictions on the trade, though I appreciate that is beyond the scope of this fic (probably). like no slaves since Ainz is against that.

The Envoy of the Holy Kingdom better do some studying fast. Never promise an undead everything :D

Hmm, by this stage, while it was expected, I am getting a little bit tired of the remarks from Nazarick that everything is going to Ainz' plan. I know it is what they will say but at the same time it's getting a little repetitive. Just my feeling as I read through the first part of this chapter.

Though nice curveball with the Slane Theocracy. With Ainz though, even if he made the wrong decision, I expect both Albedo and Demiurge would be worried that they had gotten something wrong, rather than that he had.

You are handling the large number of characters well, though with some of the OCs, it might be nice to see some of their thoughts every once in a while. They are serving their purposes, but not much else. I don't know a lot of their background. It's a stylistic comment so if it doesn't suit, just ignore.

Actually thinking back on the previous chapter, did Demiurge set up no protection against scrying? Obviously he could expect Ainz to watch him but that could easily be by a high level spell, or Nazarick itself but the others used low level spells. Did he turn off protections?

There was much 'lol'ing with this chapter given that everything is going as Ainz plans... even if he didn't know he planned it. He's such a lucky guy! Though it is cute. I want to pat the Adventurer's on their head and reaassure them that of course Ainz will help them. it's his plan after all, but they won't like that so they will just have to learn that for themselves.

Oh, how nice the maids are, that they care about the formation! :D Though I am glad to see that the Adventure's and Fortress are being sensible. It makes them all the more believable as characters, especially as experienced characters and fighters.

Couple of grammatical errors and such. I really noticed it with a few odd commas. At least to me they read oddly. Though there was a heap of errors with their attacks. No punctuation at all.

Oh, they killed one... I am writing this as I read it so that was a bit of a surprise. A good one though. The Demon Maids are best when being demon like, though it should comfort the Empress that they took a little damage. Just a little bit. You did mention a little bit of blood but with what happened after it doesn't really matter.

And to leave it on a cliff hanger at such an early stage!

Very enjoyable. The fights are good but maybe a little light on with the details. There is nothing wrong with that, but it can sometimes make visualising them a bit difficult but that doesn't make it any less fun. Your speed with events is definitely a plus.

Yay, evil Demiur... err Jaldaboath-sama! It's always a pleasure seeing you. It would not be a pleasure being on the other side as you though. The very first sentence read a bit oddly until I went back and REALLY looked at it. I missed one of the 'of'. It made a difference!

Loved the fact that Demiurge figured out Ainz' intent with Shalltear and is now copying him like a good little demon. Actually lol'd at the scene with the Empress. Specifically the ending of it and about their options becoming frighteningly scarce. There really is only one option. Get on their knees and start praying to Ainz! Demiurge would probably even give them a cookie if they did that for real!

Haha, on the end scene. It is only now that you begin to see the power of Naz... Jaldaboath! I am wondering if they ever figure out that the demons are just summons. Surely someone has to wonder where all these demons have been hiding for so long? If they find out that they are summons I imagine it would be the cause of even more despair.

I do it mostly because one of my beta readers complained she didn't know where scenes were set unless I put a location mark at the beginning. It might be an idea for your fics as well. It helps the reader settle the scene location in their mind right at the beginning. I admit, sometimes you don't want that, so in those cases I generally go 'Unknown location.'

You changed the way you did dialogue in this chapter to what I expected :D Ignore my previous comment.

There's a few missing capital letters here and there.

I liked the worry displayed by the Adventurers. There wasn't a wasted word with them, so that was good. :) The quick motions are good and the fact that these are all OCs isn't too bad. I'm trying to figure out if it's because having read Vol 12 and 13 I can view this as an alternate version though I suspect it's because they are realistic rather than the first reason, and it's a good story. It's good for the normal Overlord reason - Ainz or Ainz' force get to curb stomp everyone :D