Reviews for Someone to Look Out For
rosellashipper43 chapter 1 . 11/5/2019
ha ha no human can overpower an angel seriously you might wanna rethink this or do a rewrite
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 2 . 10/25/2019
And i lose all interest when a human can overpower an angel.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/10/2019
This is an amazing story, I really like your writing.
SINE NOMINE chapter 4 . 5/11/2019
A well written and detailed story that portrays the characters and emotions with both humor and purpose. Sadly abandoned, if the posting dates are accurate. I complement the writer on the work they have done. May you one day find your muse once again for this or any other project yet to be realized.
sen chapter 4 . 12/26/2017
I just found this and got me hooked immediately!
Abel chapter 4 . 12/24/2017
This story is amazing. Downright amazing. I love the WAY you write... Type? You get it lol. Before even reading the 4th paragraph, I knew I was hooked just from the way it was presented.

Then you have the premise, which (and I have to admit my bias here) is my favorite thing ever. Witches. Witches and interesting creatures who live lives of hidden magic in the modern day, this is my favorite thing. Again, biased(I'm Wiccan), but I love it.

The story itself is shaping up to be amazing, too. Hans is a demon lord? Elsa is an innocent(and comically uninformed) angel? Anna and Rapunzel are air headed witches? It's all amazing.

I can't wait to see where this goes.

(And as a note, I'm sad to hear about your depression. I have an old friend who suffers from it, and I try my hardest to help her(tons hugs and kisses almost every day, going out clubbing with her until I'm literally sick and she's finally smiling again, constantly putting her up, etc) and I hope I'm doing a bit of good there. I don't know what I could do for you(I'm a rando on the internet, ya know?), except say that you're an awesome person, and you aren't in it totally alone. Sorry I can't do more, but a screen can do only so much.)

That ended on a less cheery note, but you, and your story, are the tits. And I hope you don't forget that.
GrowingLoveAndLigh chapter 4 . 11/20/2017
I've waited for months to finally read this update and I can gladly say it was fantastic 3 the way you have with wards is something else, it takes me to another world. When I reached the end of the chapter I wanted to cry, I mean, no more storyyyyyyy D: already ended? xD OK, don't worry, I'm joking with u :*
By the way, if I'll ever be in need of a pen friend don't hesitate to contact me on my e-mail. I don't use this account much, but I promise to check it at least once a day, just in case :* ty for sharing your gift with us 3
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2017
yyaassssssss love the story really interesting! please do more!
The Myth Rider chapter 4 . 11/7/2017
This is super cute, and the whole story has been super fascinating. Though for some reason, I find the idea of Eugene being an angel hilarious. X3 Either way, I very much look forward to the next update. I hope all goes well and allows you that. 3
soybean16 chapter 4 . 11/7/2017
finally an update! thought this story was already abandoned. thanks for this wonderful chapter.
misconstrued0892 chapter 4 . 11/7/2017
Wow. This story has me hooked. Elsa is absolutely adorable clueless and I’m so intrigued as to what the hell is with Anna that she needs 5 angels to protect her. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Guest chapter 4 . 11/7/2017
I have to appreciate your writing. You have your way with words! I really like the way you write clueless Elsa.
Two silly nitpicks:

1. Anna exclaims "I'm gonna let Oaken down"

2. Elsa extends her wings. Awesome moment, but doesn't that tear through her bra and shirt?

Ignore the silly nitpicks and keep up the good work
Guest chapter 4 . 11/6/2017
Okay, I just have to ask... What is an Angel potion and how does it prove someone is an angel if they drink it?

That aside, I enjoyed the chapter. Keep up the good work.
kurei555 chapter 4 . 11/6/2017
What is it about Anna that needs 5 angels to look after her? I guess based on Elsa's reaction to Flynn's smolder, she's Anna leaning~ looking forward to more of this story!
kurei555 chapter 3 . 11/6/2017
This is so much fun! I really like this Angel!Elsa, so cute *eeeep* I can also never say no to Elsanna xDD Is it wrong to assume Angels are humanoids who learn the human way after they are summoned and granted a heart? From Anna's thoughts of what an Angel is like, almost lack of empathy, to Elsa showing empathy towards Anna; or is that just something the protector and protected have?
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