ummm...

hahaha a nineteen yr old not knowing about sex :)) lol

its absolutely amazing so far you did a great job

Thank you for not making the fluff so sappy, I really love this fan fic, a raw representation of true love️

I just read this for the second time and I want you to know that you are one of my favorite writers. This story contains everything I love. El's innocence, Mike's willingness to drop everything to be with her, and the sweet but incredibly sexy way they make love!

No protection? Wow, kinky

Perfect

Wow..so getting a little rough there was really hot lol. Great chapter!

I wanted to cry that was so beautiful. A love as natural as anything and the pacing of this fic is perfect :)

Ahh the way you have Mike explain things to El is just perfect...so much understanding and clarity, it's gorgeous to read. You've captured her innocence and Mike's acceptance of it so well...

but why should they have sadomasochistic tendencies ... Eleven is not one of those ... she would allow mike, but she does not like it.

shit ... seriously?

I'm sure that mike is one of those jealousy ... you know when they found the body of will, he just pushed her without letting her explain and when he started to bother him, he threw him a blow and like shit the place where she slept .
of that when you get angry does not measure your actions.
in truth, enjoy the chapter

shit ... seriously?

ohh I'm speechless here ...
that was ... intense

damn son.