This is good

Good story so far

This is good. Unlike some of your others it is much better written with less mistakes. A very pleasant read. I also like the pairing of Naruto with Shizune since it’s less common than many others and as much as I like pairing him up with say tenten or the ice queens Shizune is honestly a better choice unless you are going with canon Naruto who is immature

You should add tenten and Shizune to the relationship!
So few good story’s with that pairing.

Nice chapter and story keep up the good work

Good freaking chapter man I look forward to the next one

Interesting story.

This sounds like it would be a lovely story. But it's written like a report. Like you're showing me the story not telling me the story. Keep writing please but find a beta, this sounds like a great idea.

Interesting concept to be sure, but the poor grammar and sentence structure make it unreadable. I’d recommend spell checking your work before updating and then getting a beta to go over it as well

Damn king. That was bloody awesome

sealing method or jutsu not mehtind

first of all the faux Japanese is annoying as heck.. second while I applaud that you would set such idea, I do not like how it is executed.

Interesting!

Hmm, I wonder if Naruto really can be Obito anyways keep up the great work!

Woo-hoo! I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work boss!