Noooooooo

I'd expect one of the princesses or Amy to be kidnapped, but Mario...a little unexpected.

"Fatal" might not be the correct word for that. "Fateful" might be, however.
("Every day is usual to him...until that one fatal day.")

Great job! Looks like Mario and Sonic are starting to get along well, and their friends have teleported somewhere in this new world. Fairy out!

oh my gawd
what a gud storhy

Now they my birthday party is over, I've had time to read you chapter. Looks like you're doing good so far.

I've been waiting for this! I'm not too fond of Mario and Sonic fighting each other because of many other fanfictions I've read showing their friendship, as well as the stories I'm writing. But other than that, looks like both heroes have a quest coming out, and I can pretty much predict that it won't be very easy for them especially at the beginning, since they still hate each other, but they'll get used to it later. I'm also quite curious about this new villain! Can't wait to read more.

wow cewl story bro

Well, it's good to see you got over your writer's block and I'm enjoying the story so far.

Like the switch between worlds and how you switch Mario and Sonic as narrator.

The title sounds similar to my second Mario and Sonic crossover story, but I guess it's a common choice. Anyway, you got me interested. Can't wait for the next.