It was great... but I have to admit that I cracked um at constant vigiliance ... since Harry Potter I can't read thise words without shouting them out loud and then start crackling like a madmen... sry nevertheless since this is no therapy session :) You write really well and I like that your characters aren't too OC ... This scene would have fitted perfectly into the books and it's a shame that there aren't more friendly interactions between Jasper and Call :) Well ... I'll go and devoure the rest of your fanfics:) thank you for your hood work

I don't know how to express how much I love this fanfic

Cool. I like the way you write it and how well you make these seem real!

I loved this idea! Could you make a story/chapter about what would happen if Jasper spent the summer with Call instead of Aaron? Pleaseeeee...

Call and Jasper, I see... I'd like those two become friends because... because Aaron *dies crying*