V good well done you ! Another story perhaps for holidays, plz continue on.

I LOVE the idea of little William Darcy learning swear words from his aunt Shazzer.
AW! even William Darcy's pint-sized tantrums sound cute.
"nightclothes" should be one word.
"left over", used in that sense, should be two words.

Hey!
Oh, god, I was laughing so hard xD
Amazing!

Alicia :)

Omg hope u continue, what will happen next in the same evening. Will Mark be divested out of that costume. Will he win the heart of thr princess. Will their son settle down and go off to sleep, perhaps not. with all the sugar consumption. Anyway best of luck with your writing (s).